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TEAMWORK

Apr 14, 2007 17:14

Title: Teamwork
Written By: suzvoy
Timeline: 413/414
Rating: R
Warnings: Language, implied sex
What if: ...they had gone on the Liberty Ride together? And stayed in a tent every single night they were away?
Author's Notes: Yup, Toronto does actually have a camp site - I love the internet *g*. Big, big thanks to my beta, the lovely Miss N.

( Teamwork )

Comments 114

blue_eyedstar April 14 2007, 22:04:12 UTC

Now THAT'S how I wanted the Liberty Ride to be! Cowlip should 've sticked to your story, I ♥ it! VVV beautiful.

suzvoy May 7 2007, 12:31:14 UTC

Thank you so much!

herberta2006 April 14 2007, 22:46:03 UTC

I really enjoyed this, and I especially loved the last line. So perfect!

suzvoy May 7 2007, 12:31:23 UTC

Thank you!

secretsolitaire April 15 2007, 00:59:00 UTC

"I'm not expecting monogamy," Justin said honestly. "In fact, I don't think I even want it." He didn't trick as much as Brian, but sometimes he still enjoyed it. Enjoyed just having the possibility. "But Brian, if we live together, we live together. I'm not your border, or some piece of fluff you're supporting. I want to help out with the bills - when I can," he admitted. There was a significant difference between their incomes for the time being, and he couldn't deny that. "If you want to buy a new piece of furniture or re-decorate, we discuss it together. We have equal say. And..." he paused, not sure how Brian was going to react. "No tricking in the loft. For either of us. It has nothing to do with us being together, and doesn't belong there."

Biting his bottom lip, Brian at least didn't look pissed off. "I'll probably fuck up."I really loved this part, both for Brian's response (perfect!) and because this is the kind of mature, reasonable discussion they should have had in canon. So many of their problems could have been solved ( ( ... )

suzvoy May 7 2007, 12:31:52 UTC

So many of their problems could have been solved (or at least improved) if they'd actually talked to each other. Heh, can you tell I'm a woman? ;-)

Something gave you away ;D

I'm so, so glad you enjoyed it - thank you so much!

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suzvoy May 7 2007, 12:32:22 UTC

Oh, wow. Wow, thank you so much! Hee!

Teamwork firehead30 April 15 2007, 06:14:14 UTC

Very nice enjoyable read.

Re: Teamwork suzvoy May 7 2007, 12:32:35 UTC

Thanks, hon :)