TEAMWORK

Apr 14, 2007 17:14

Title: Teamwork
Written By: suzvoy
Timeline: 413/414
Rating: R
Warnings: Language, implied sex
What if: ...they had gone on the Liberty Ride together? And stayed in a tent every single night they were away?
Author's Notes: Yup, Toronto does actually have a camp site - I love the internet *g*. Big, big thanks to my beta, the lovely Miss N.

Teamwork )

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jule1122 April 14 2007, 18:27:28 UTC
I was reading along thinking about how much better this was than cannon. Loving all the moments between Brian and Justin and then you hit me with the Prom flashback. I so wasn't expecting, but it really worked especially getting both of them to understand that being partners means they both will be weak sometimes and that's OK. I love your additions to the moving in conversation.

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suzvoy May 7 2007, 12:30:04 UTC
Thank you so, so much! I'm so glad you enjoyed it :)

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methan_ol April 14 2007, 18:32:01 UTC
Fantastic!

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suzvoy May 7 2007, 12:30:13 UTC
Thank you!

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sra_black April 14 2007, 18:50:05 UTC
This is amazing. I wish it had happened like this in the show.

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suzvoy May 7 2007, 12:30:25 UTC
Oh wow, thank you so much!

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seanmegansean April 14 2007, 19:48:21 UTC
Except for one tiny paragraph that's filled with too much angst for my personal liking, this really is the perfect fic. Loved the dialogue and the little things that showed how well B/J know each other and how far they've come. I thought this was a really well crafted story and 99,5% wonderful. Thanks for writing it :))

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suzvoy May 7 2007, 12:30:48 UTC
Thanks so much, hon :) I'm so glad you liked most of it *g*.

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singlewoman April 14 2007, 20:29:44 UTC
I liked this so much better than canon. A lovely story. The flashback caught me by surprise, but it worked well and was handled beautifully.

Thanks for writing and sharing this.

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suzvoy May 7 2007, 12:31:03 UTC
Oh wow, thank you so much!

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