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AT THE MALL

Dec 31, 2006 18:47

Title: At the Mall
Written By: wren_kt7oz
Timeline: Some time early season 5 - just after Justin gets back from LA and before things get weird
Rating:. R (for language)
Warnings: Shmoop
Summary: Three perspectives on a visit to the Mall to see Santa
Author's Notes: Un-beta’d - so blame me. But thanks to the challenge organizers.

( At the Mall )

Comments 34

randysgirl_645 January 2 2007, 00:49:19 UTC

aww this was such a sweet and cute story

wren_kt7oz January 19 2007, 03:23:16 UTC

Thank you. I love Brian and Gus. Throw Justin into the mix, and I think it's an irresistible combination.

hjohnson1 January 2 2007, 03:03:53 UTC

Gus point of view is so cute, I really like reading the three of them together.

wren_kt7oz January 19 2007, 03:23:44 UTC

Thank you. I like the three of them together too.

seanmegansean January 2 2007, 15:40:30 UTC

Gus' POV is adorable. Love the last line to bits :)

wren_kt7oz January 19 2007, 03:26:51 UTC

Thanks. I suspect that Justin and Brian share a lot of laughter (we even got glimpses of it in canon) and that a child Gus's age would pick up on that, and that it would definitely colour the way he saw his father.

zortrana January 4 2007, 00:40:05 UTC

Aww Gus schmoop! It made me smile.

wren_kt7oz January 19 2007, 03:27:28 UTC

Thanks. Glad it brought smiles. :)

lilibel January 4 2007, 09:28:45 UTC

That's so cute ^^

wren_kt7oz January 19 2007, 03:27:54 UTC

Thanks. Glad you enjoyed.