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Entry #23 - "Seven Conversations About One"

Apr 18, 2006 16:29

Title: Seven Conversations About One
Written By: kayebee_12
Timeline: Post Season Five
Rating: PG-13 for strong language
Warnings: Minor character death
Genre: Romance, Drama, Angst, Humour

( Seven Conversations About One )

Comments 45

tamalinn April 24 2006, 15:20:33 UTC

wow. just... wow.

kayebee_12 May 8 2006, 11:02:40 UTC

Yay, two WOWs!

Thank you for reading. I gathered that with the 'two wows', you liked it. Heee.

♥ Kaye

claramarie12 April 24 2006, 19:03:09 UTC

"Sometimes the most momentous or terrible things in life happen so fast, but you live through them really slow."

Loved that line-- beautiful story.

kayebee_12 May 8 2006, 12:14:59 UTC

Thank you very much for reading the story, hun. Glad you liked it and that it was worth the time you spent on it.

♥ Kaye

dreambee3 April 25 2006, 04:08:51 UTC

I liked the start, couldn’t wait for it to be confirmed that it was Gus getting married, and it was lovely later when it was. You recaptured, for me, the simple and supportive friendship Brian and Mikey enjoyed earlier in their relationship, and I really didn’t think that was possible to achieve. Your Mikey had an intelligence sadly lacking for the most part in canon, lol, but you did well to show that the words, the thoughts and the advice came from Ben’s influence on his life. Ben’s illness was difficult reading, but important in helping Brian see the deepest meaning of relationships.

I loved the choice and use of the beautiful quotes. You did a great job taking us through Brian and Justin’s journey back towards a good life together. ♥

kayebee_12 May 8 2006, 12:13:46 UTC

I liked the start, couldn’t wait for it to be confirmed that it was Gus getting married, and it was lovely later when it was.

Yay! I hope that clinched your attention and made you stayed on to read the entire story. Hahaha

You recaptured, for me, the simple and supportive friendship Brian and Mikey enjoyed earlier in their relationship, and I really didn’t think that was possible to achieve. Your Mikey had an intelligence sadly lacking for the most part in canon, lol, but you did well to show that the words, the thoughts and the advice came from Ben’s influence on his life. Ben’s illness was difficult reading, but important in helping Brian see the deepest meaning of relationships. Your thoughts are exactly my thoughts when I was in the process of piecing the pieces of this story, together. And now, I feel good that some people share my thoughts and insights about the genuineness of the relationships between Brian/Michael, Brian/Justin and even Ben/Michael. I also presented a bit of Justin/Michael relationship in here as I ( ... )

crazy4qaf April 25 2006, 23:45:35 UTC

Wow. I so utterly loved this. Your Brian voice is excellent and I just love the way he loves his Sunshine. Oh and OMG, Brian being a freakin` ring bearer for Gussy? Nothing short of amazing. *grins* Plus, you made me love Mikey. That`s worth of some kind of award, believe me. Don`t get me wrong, I`m not a Mikey hater, but there ain`t enough cheese in this world to go with all the whining Mikey did in canon. :p *lol*

kayebee_12 May 8 2006, 11:36:19 UTC

Wow. I so utterly loved this.

Wow. Thank you v.v. much!

Your Brian voice is excellent.....

You are so kind. *blushes*

and OMG, Brian being a freakin` ring bearer for Gussy? Nothing short of amazing.

If Brian could stand as Michael and Ben's ring bearer, surely, he'll do the same for his Sonny boy.

Plus, you made me love Mikey. That`s worth of some kind of award, believe me. Don`t get me wrong, I`m not a Mikey hater, but there ain`t enough cheese in this world to go with all the whining Mikey did in canon.

I so win at life! Yay! Just know that I wrote my Mikey on the account of the many years he's been living with Ben and the positive impact it has done to him. :)

Thanks again for reading. Your comments meant a whole lot to me, especially from someone who does write good B/J fics like you.

♥ Kaye

crazy4qaf May 8 2006, 13:58:56 UTC

Thanks again for reading. Your comments meant a whole lot to me, especially from someone who does write good B/J fics like you.

*blushes* Well, thank you very much, hon. It was completely my pleasure and I hope I`ll see more of your stories soon. *grins*

heretic_x April 26 2006, 00:26:20 UTC

hmm, Could it be Your Sweater?
Brilliant, sophisticated, honest version of Brian and Justin. Loved the humor, Brian's voice, Justin's voice, their back and forth banter was some of the best I've read.
The scenes with Michael I think were a realistic portrayal of how their relationship will turn out. The scenes with Ben, all I can say is I sense when someone has faced that finality and that experience shown brilliantly through your words and affected me deeply. Amazing story from beginning to end.

kayebee_12 May 8 2006, 12:27:55 UTC

OMG, to be mistaken as yoursweater was such an honor. *blushes*

Brilliant, sophisticated, honest version of Brian and Justin. Loved the humor, Brian's voice, Justin's voice, their back and forth banter was some of the best I've read.

Wow. Thank you very much for the encouraging feedback. I'm so glad you liked the story.

The story was a bit difficult to finish as it started out as mere conversations that I had to piece and blend together to create a cohesive story line. There were so many deleted scenes, believe me. :) I'm so relieved that most ppl were able to grasp the perspective in which the conversations played a big part of.

Thanks once again for the very kind words, they mean a lot to me.

♥ Kaye