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Play It Again

Jul 03, 2009 17:13

Title: Play It Again
Author: wizzard890 and pyrrhiccomedy
Rating: R
Characters: America/Russia
Premise: As the war grinds on, America and Russia find themselves sharing a drink or ten in Casablanca.

( Read it behind the cut. )

the chosen end, fanfic

Comments 97

jinsai July 3 2009, 12:46:23 UTC

Ooh. The whole time I was reading this I was thinking 'this is awesome' and 'oh, they're so going to regret this come morning'.

^____^

pyrrhiccomedy July 3 2009, 15:57:29 UTC

They are boys made entirely out of regret. XD That little moment when America wakes up and then immediately shuts his eyes again is his brain going "...BACK IN FIVE MINUTES."

inner_wings July 3 2009, 14:19:49 UTC

Okay, this is my new favorite chapter, and I don't just say that every time you update (okay, I do, but so what, I really mean it this time.) So hot and bittersweet and AWESOME.
I was half expecting someone to say 'here's looking at you, kid.' XD

pyrrhiccomedy July 3 2009, 15:59:06 UTC

I was half expecting someone to say 'here's looking at you, kid.' XD

That was only the working title. XD We figured this one was a tiny bit more subtle.

I'm really glad you liked it! Wizard and I were talking about this one afterwards, and just going "Man, our readers are just gonna be like '...wat'" XD I'm so glad you guys let us get away with stuff like this.

anasyrma July 3 2009, 14:19:49 UTC

DUDE, whenever I check to see if y'all updated, YOU HAVE. IT'S SO COOL WTF.

That said - I have nothing really coherent to say but ♥_♥. That was so cute and bitterly sad and idk desperate all at the same time.

pyrrhiccomedy July 3 2009, 16:01:44 UTC

That was so cute and bitterly sad and idk desperate all at the same time.

Desperate is totally the right word for it. They're both just "Oh God, yes, you, I'll do anything, have we drank enough to get away with this yet?"

And XD. We try to update every 4-5 days-ish! Right now we're struggling to get ahead again, since we used up our backlog during Wizard's vacation. But hopefully updates will be reliable again soon!

sakru909 July 3 2009, 14:47:27 UTC

I like this, hot and bittersweet at the same time. Even the end notes are interesting.

pyrrhiccomedy July 3 2009, 16:02:30 UTC

Thank you, I'm glad you enjoyed it!

youkofujima July 3 2009, 15:26:29 UTC

Drunken sex and the flashes of what Russia used to be. That is just...a lot of it just twists and turns like a knife.

Plus I love the detail about their necks.

pyrrhiccomedy July 3 2009, 16:03:55 UTC

Plus I love the detail about their necks.

I realized what with one thing and another, we'd never actually said that America understood perfectly well that Russia's neck was a no-fly zone. It seemed a bit overdue to suggest that. >_>