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counteragent March 4 2008, 23:30:17 UTC
Fabulous. Powerful expression of her monomania, her grief. I hope she finds peace.

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kriptkeeper March 5 2008, 07:04:44 UTC
Heartbreakingly good. I so wanted her to be able to find out the truth, to share her grief with Sam, but it was much more realistic and powerful for her to not know, and for that grief to turn into hate. It's so sad to see her have to go through the ups and downs of the boys getting captured and escaping. Very realistic, and very touching.

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alchemise March 5 2008, 07:06:43 UTC
Here from barkley's rec, and wow, just ouch. That hurt a lot, but I love that you didn't pull any punches. Jess's mom reacting like this is just so damn believable.

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cofax7 March 15 2008, 03:48:04 UTC
Oh, that's just great. Of course Jess' family would think that.

Excellently done.

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lovetheguys March 17 2008, 17:16:15 UTC
I never realized that, of course a medical examiner would have questioned that slit in Jess' belly, and Sam's abrupt departure would raise a red flag, of course! What an original story, and excellently written, too! BRAVO! Love, Robin

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