Title: The Hunter Gets Captured By the Game
Chapter: Standalone
Author: Boots
Rating: NC-17
Genre: Fantasy/vampire AU, romance, smut
Warnings: Male/male sex, foursome, some mind control (though the sex is consensual)
Pairing: Ruki X Shou, Kai X Uruha, Ruki/Shou/Kai/Uruha
Disclaimer: Boys belong to PS Company, I own the story only.
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short comment is short and slightly incoherent, but that's what i get for reading your stuff at five in the morning! guh, this was amazing. i cannot wait for you to write more!
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I'm hoping to get more from this universe! There's a lot of depth and complexity in the character relationships and a lot of material I had to leave on the cutting room floor this time around. Thanks for reading! (And your comment wasn't incoherent, I knew just what you meant!)
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I have a thing for vampires. Like a serious love and this was just...8D perfect. Shou as a hunter, Ruki as an ancient...Kai and Uruha being their delicious horny selves...that was so hot *Q*
I just love how you took the concept of vampire hypnosis to fill that mind control square, it was so ingenious I don't think I could've thought of that myself. Of course the backstory was well crafted, all the details nicely included to create this believable universe, this totally worked. And the sex...Oh lord the sex. I love how you built it up, the mild tension before Shou goes to hunt, Ruki biting Uruha and Kai as foreplay of sorts, the foursome...unf unf unf! And then finale with Ruki and Shon bonding on a physical level but also on an emotional, mental one...it was flawless and gorgeous and perfect.
Amazing work as always my dear, xoxo
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Vanpire hypnosis just fit that square perfectly. That was one of the squares where when I first got my second card, I said, "Oh, my God, no way in hell could I write this!" But when I read that wonderful story that misumaru did, and was inspired to do a vampire fic of my own, the whole concept of vampire hypnosis = the hypnosis/mind control square clicked into place.
I definitely wanted to show Ruki and Shou deeply bonded in every way imaginable - making it all the more ironic that they are on opposite sides of a centuries-old war between vampires and hunters. They really do have a lot in common in a way that goes far beyond them just being vocalists - including the fact that they are both polyamorous, just making everything all the more interesting. (And it will get more interesting in the future fics I have planned!)
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I agree with you Ruki has a lot of seme qualitites but he's written rather childish without a valid reason a lot of times.
So yeah I totally loved how you characterized Ruki here and his relationship with Shou despite him being a hunter.
I hope you'll write more from this universe >.
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I could never see Ruki in this story as a bottom anyway xD
<3
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