[fanfic] - changing part 4/8

[purpleicicles]

Argh! Sorry I didn't post yesterday! I spent the whole day checking out the 'Crafting art in modern Japan' exhibition at the British Museum, and my step-brothers were over, so I couldn't get any typing done after they went to bed because the sound keeps them awake. (The exhibition is awesome, by the way, I would definitely recomend it - go to the

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[jessiedark]

Thank goodness, I was having difficulty feeding that monkey on my back, he was settling for double chocolate donuts.

[purpleicicles]

*pet monkey* I'll try and get what was supposed to be today's chapter up today as well! Bear with me!

[stalkerbunny]

Just read the last three parts, and the story has only gotten more interesting. Thanks for writing :)

[purpleicicles]

Glad you think it's building up nicely - was worried about the pace!

[lillypuff]

Yay, another wonderful chapter, can't wait to see what happens next. Everyone seems to be on to Gojyo in round about sort of way.

[purpleicicles]

Yeah, I tried to craft it so that they all know something's wrong, but not what, and he knows they're worried, which just ends up making him more paranoid... what a vicious circle!

[purpleicicles]

You think? I kinda assumed that if something was ever wrong with one of them, they'd all try to get to the bottom of it individually. Any particular chara you think is OOC?

[purpleicicles]

No offense taken! I like concrit! Perhaps I was a little too eager to show Sanzo's softer side... I wanted a little of his concern to show through his general prickiliness, because I reckon that deep down inside he does realise that life without the others would be boring and waaaaay more difficult! Maybe I should make him more prickly in the next few chapters to make up for it... *nods to self*

[candika]

This just keeps getting better.