[fanfic] - changing part 4/8

[purpleicicles]

Argh! Sorry I didn't post yesterday! I spent the whole day checking out the 'Crafting art in modern Japan' exhibition at the British Museum, and my step-brothers were over, so I couldn't get any typing done after they went to bed because the sound keeps them awake. (The exhibition is awesome, by the way, I would definitely recomend it - go to the

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[purpleicicles]

You think? I kinda assumed that if something was ever wrong with one of them, they'd all try to get to the bottom of it individually. Any particular chara you think is OOC?

[purpleicicles]

No offense taken! I like concrit! Perhaps I was a little too eager to show Sanzo's softer side... I wanted a little of his concern to show through his general prickiliness, because I reckon that deep down inside he does realise that life without the others would be boring and waaaaay more difficult! Maybe I should make him more prickly in the next few chapters to make up for it... *nods to self*

[purpleicicles]

I like the way you think! I like trying to find Sanzo's other sides without making him OOC :)