Falling for a Friend Not Yet Made- a poem

[purple_ladybug1]

There are some poetic techniques I've been wanting to play around with. For example, I've noticed that a lot of my poetry talks about "I, me, you, him" aka pronouns. I wanted to write something that reflects my thoughts and feelings, is inspired by what's going on in my life, but avoids pronouns. This is the result. "another's words" is cheating a

Comments

[perseveringhope]

ooooooooh

I like!

[purple_ladybug1]

Thanks!!!

[mollywheezy]

Great poem! I applaud your lack of pronouns. I don't think "another's" is cheating. You're right. That's a very important point.