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puppycadet

Eeteuk/Kangin AU fic

Dec 14, 2007 03:24

title: to protect, to guard, to worry
theme: 001. freefall; 002/100; archive
Eeteuk/Kangin
humor and drama
i meant for this to be completely different.

( Relax. He was here a minute ago. How much trouble could he possibly-- you should probably go find him. )

!challenge: 100, !fandom: suju

Comments 22

comicbookending December 14 2007, 11:30:26 UTC

I love this so much. ;_; It's so beautiful and the ending wasn't tragic and sad and bittersweet (which would be nice, too, but sometimes I need to read something like this this that ends happily), and your characterizations for all three boys were great.

This was a joy to read~ ^_^ <3

halcyon_morn December 14 2007, 17:13:03 UTC

Your AUs are giving me a reason to live during exam period. ...Ok, that's a bit hyperbolic, but really, they're fantastic. This is the first happy!Kangteuk I've read that makes me laugh at its genius and not cry at its painfully hackneyed sap. ♥

... anonymous December 14 2007, 20:17:35 UTC

this fic is <333
and the prospect of you (hopefully *crosses fingers* because you're so awesome) writing 98 more fics makes me very VERY happy
lol... no pressure intended
anyway i love how you portrayed each character especially heechulla

please...keep up the good work.. not that you need it... but ima rootin' for you :)
cynthia

scylladakylla December 14 2007, 22:23:44 UTC

Oh, oh, oh. This was amazing and I adore the idea of Eeteuk being Kangin's guardian angel, and there were so many small, clever things in this that just made the whole idea work so WELL. ♥ Like the idea of a guardian angel being stressed out by his charge. Like Teukie having trouble breathing and talking and walking after he falls. And Heechul as an incredibly snarky angel.

The pacing was lovely, the characterizations were lovely, and I love the subtle way things changed and the way each scene just blended into the next emphasized that, the way the story alternated between Teuk's conversations with Heechul and Teuk's interaction with Kangin. How Teuk started influencing Kangin and how Kangin realizing Eeteuk was there and how Eeteuk's feelings for Kangin changed, and yeahhhhhhhhhhhhhh, I will totally stop babbling. So. Much. Love. Seriously, marry me. ♥

tora_robin December 15 2007, 12:46:53 UTC

i love how their love defied the laws of heaven and earth, and probably hell too. gosh.. im sooo damn inspired to write! thanks for writing this.