Blossoms of Innocence [One-shot]

[pumpthevolume]

Title: Blossoms of Innocence [One-shot]
Author: Nat, a.k.a. pumpthevolume
Starring: Nishikido Ryo (NEWS) & Adachi Sakura (made-up character), ft. Ueda Tatsuya (KAT-TUN)
Rating: NC-16 for my useless smut XDD
Author's note: Er yeah another uselessly crap Ryo smut XDD. I seem to be in a smut phase of writing LOL. Oh yeah, sorry Jen for stealing one of your names *

Comments

[chibilover14]

*___* OMG! YOU WROTE AND POSTED IT!!! *FLAILS* XDDD
Why does it say Adachi Hana? O.O;;; Oh well... STOP STEALING!!! STEALING ISH WRONG!!! DON'T BE LIKE ANI!!! X__X
You must have had fun writing this. XDDD Wait... what got you writing this smut in the first place? O.O;;;

PFFT! RYO THE PERV!!! XDDD Actually all guys are.

I thought that Sakura was gonna get raped or something. O__O;;; I dunno why.
Wow... Ueda actually said nice things about Ryo. O.O;;; Interesting. XDDD

SEX IN A JACUZZI ISH HOT!!! XDDD YOUR SMUT ISH AWESOME AND DON'T YOU DARE SAY THAT YOU FAILED AGAIN!!! RAWR!!! IT WAS SERIOUSLY AWESOME AND HOT!!! XDDD *FAILS AT WRITING SMUT* Now I'll go edit my crappy smut...

Your use of words ish awesome as usual... *sigh and goes to emo corner*

Why are they even watching this? XDDD Tegoshi ish there as usual! Loved the ending! XD

By the way, I'm only reading het by you. XP

[pumpthevolume]

Oops because the character I stole the "Adachi" from was called Adachi Hana... But I changed it now. Thanks for pointing it out (:

Er, you did. When I dared you to write requested that ChiTaro from you... I think.

She would've got raped if Ueda wasn't there but he was so... yeah.

IFLOFFLEDAGAIN. ANDMYSMUTISCRAPPIERTHANYOURS.

I dunno they want free and/or live porn or something, lol. And yay for Tesshi XDD

Hontou ni? *feels honoured* But my hentai is flofflish!

[sutoreicat]

Oooh, hot once again! Sakura is one lucky girl, the idea of sex with Ryo in a jacuzzi is... akjisajfieojfioe *adds to list of ultimate fantasies* XD

You have a lovely way of writing too, I love it. Keep the smut coming. ;D ♥

[pumpthevolume]

Hehe thanks~ *blushes*

Naww my smut sucks. Which is why I'm practising. AS IN PRACTISING WRITING, NOT... *ahem*

XDD

[sutoreicat]

No, it doesn't suck! Trust me, I've read some really awful (as in written really terribly XD) smut, like they just killed the whole feel of it, ahaha. XD

Oh and I forgot to mention this earlier, but when Sakura mentions that she's "due tomorrow", it wouldn't really matter because you can still get pregnant on your period. At least that's what I've learned in sex ed, lmao. XD!

[pumpthevolume]

Haha, I'm imagining a scenario that's like, someone's on top of the other person and the one of them is like, "I need the toilet" XDD.

Yeah I know but I had to make her say something to reassure him XDD.

[allergictotears]

lol this was adorable/amazing! but even if ueda wasn't there she wouldn't have gotten raped cause ryo was there right?
gah i love tegoshi hiding in the bushes! it totally cracked me up hah

[pumpthevolume]

Oh yeah, true, true. *headdesk for idiocy*

But I wanted to put Ueda in because I'd just watched the Real Face PV (for the thousandth time LOL) and he looks awesomely shmexxy in it~

Hehe same with Tesshi, I love writing about him ;)

Glad you liked it and thanks for commenting (:

[fuuken_gamu]

Ahhhhhhh!

This was so smexxxxy!

I love how you write this mature fanfics XD

Hope you'll put more up! ;)

[pumpthevolume]

Hontou ni?

I'm so glad you liked it (:

Did you read the other crappy smuts I wrote too..?

[fuuken_gamu]

*goes off to read* XD