Blossoms of Innocence [One-shot]

[pumpthevolume]

Title: Blossoms of Innocence [One-shot]
Author: Nat, a.k.a. pumpthevolume
Starring: Nishikido Ryo (NEWS) & Adachi Sakura (made-up character), ft. Ueda Tatsuya (KAT-TUN)
Rating: NC-16 for my useless smut XDD
Author's note: Er yeah another uselessly crap Ryo smut XDD. I seem to be in a smut phase of writing LOL. Oh yeah, sorry Jen for stealing one of your names *

Comments

[sutoreicat]

Oooh, hot once again! Sakura is one lucky girl, the idea of sex with Ryo in a jacuzzi is... akjisajfieojfioe *adds to list of ultimate fantasies* XD

You have a lovely way of writing too, I love it. Keep the smut coming. ;D ♥

[pumpthevolume]

Hehe thanks~ *blushes*

Naww my smut sucks. Which is why I'm practising. AS IN PRACTISING WRITING, NOT... *ahem*

XDD

[sutoreicat]

No, it doesn't suck! Trust me, I've read some really awful (as in written really terribly XD) smut, like they just killed the whole feel of it, ahaha. XD

Oh and I forgot to mention this earlier, but when Sakura mentions that she's "due tomorrow", it wouldn't really matter because you can still get pregnant on your period. At least that's what I've learned in sex ed, lmao. XD!

[pumpthevolume]

Haha, I'm imagining a scenario that's like, someone's on top of the other person and the one of them is like, "I need the toilet" XDD.

Yeah I know but I had to make her say something to reassure him XDD.

[sutoreicat]

LOL! That would be hilarious, but no, it wasn't quite like that. XD

Alright, I just notice things like that, so don't mind me. >_>; Haha.

[pumpthevolume]

Haha, okay good 'cause that'd be weird.

Naw, it's okay. It's better when people point out mistakes and stuff cuz then I can write better (: