Comments | pumpkinriver: FIC: Can See Its Beady Eyes

pumpkinriver

FIC: Can See Its Beady Eyes

Feb 13, 2011 02:32

Fandom: Glee
Pairing: Gen but with mentions of Klaine
Rating: 15
Word Count: 4,596
Disclaimer: Fiction. As in: "An imaginative creation or a pretense that does not represent actuality but has been invented."
Warnings: Disturbing subject matter. And attack with heavily implied homophobia. Seriously, this is dark but I don't want to give away anything ( Read more... )

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Comments 16

adammlambert3 February 13 2011, 02:50:49 UTC

D: poor kurt.

pumpkinriver February 13 2011, 16:02:01 UTC

Yeah I was a little harsh :S. Glad you read it though :D

kevsam February 13 2011, 06:15:32 UTC

Oh wow! Please, please tell me there's going to be more?! Because you can't leave me like that!

pumpkinriver February 13 2011, 16:03:21 UTC

Thank you! I'm so glad you liked it :). I'm undecided about more, I kinda want to write from Blaine's POV a follow on from here but I'm stil thinking about it. I'll definitely keep it in mind though :)

dreamsofspike February 13 2011, 06:44:08 UTC

so happy that you're writing glee fic now! :D and i really hope there's more of this, it was sooo incredibly intense and terrifying, and i was so relieved when kurt started responding... your characterization is very good :)

pumpkinriver February 13 2011, 16:05:39 UTC

Hey hun! Really glad you liked this and like the characterisations. Finn is not someone I found easy to write.

I figured I needed to start spreading the missery around another fandom! Although this is only my second completed Glee fic, therr's a graveyard of semi written fics on my computer but I can never finish them so I probably won't write that many. Plus, since my American Idol days I have gotten a new job that takes up far more time so.... :S

puguita February 13 2011, 06:44:22 UTC

Wow! Scary. The suspense was just crazy good here. Finn's POV worked really well and the characterizations were amazing. My poor, sweet Kurt always breaking my heart.
I really hope we find out what happens next soon!

pumpkinriver February 13 2011, 16:06:55 UTC

Thank you so much! That means loads because I really played around with the layout and flow to try and create tension. Saying you thought it was tense just means the world!

Although this was meant to be a one off I am thinking of another part but we'll see what happens :)

akigarin February 13 2011, 13:08:41 UTC

Ooh, I remember this from the angst meme. I'm so glad there's more. You've written the tension so well.

pumpkinriver February 13 2011, 16:08:36 UTC

Thank you so much! On the angst meme I was trying to write in a Finn like way and it just wasn't working which is why it has taken me so long to finish this...and abandon attempting 16 year old boy speak!! :D

I'm really glad you read this even after having seen the beginning on the meme and thank you so much for commenting :)