hi, i need your help!

[pulpfacts]

as some of you might know i am planning on auditioning for berklee school of music this april 4 because they're dropping by fullerton, ca. we live 20 minutes away from the place, and sakto lang because i was really about to go there for summer anyway. i'm taking my chances. i know, the competition is stiff. i'm getting really scared. but i'm more

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[operatingroom]

DUMB.

Hahaha just kidding. I'll read this tomorrow. I'm sleeping na e. Cos, you know, we have Philo tomorrow at 7!

PS - We have a quiz.
PPS - This is Carina!

[pulpfacts]

HI CARINA!

i will add you to my lj. thanks! and yeah i know we have a quiz i want to go to school early tomorrow so i can "study" (or in other words, leech off) with people!

[anonymous]

siguro try not to be so informal (e.g. "DJ-ing". app form pa rin to kahit pang music school. haha. yun lang. ayos iba (although di ko kinumpleto basahin. hahahaXD)

-mag.z

[anonymous]

magno (kung hindi mo gets. hahaha)

[pulpfacts]

okay, salamat bro! hehehe

[ephraim_]

sleep music might not be appropriate for them. hehe.

I'm a fast learner, and I'm able to appreciate almost anything that is music, but I hope to improve on my knowledge, especially in theory.

could be written as:

I'm a fast learner, and I'm able to appreciate almost anything that is music. However, I hope to improve on my knowledge, especially in theory.

as for musical strengths, i think the tone should be a bit more formal. also, the thought of the paragraph does not flow smoothly. and, as for your favorite part of being a musician, the "the next level is self-expression" is vague. try to put stuff like "i believe that there are several levels of music appreciation" as the first sentence or as the thesis statement.

:D

[ephraim_]

edit:

I'm a fast learner, and I'm able to appreciate almost anything that is music. However, I hope to improve on my knowledge as well, especially in theory.

[pulpfacts]

many thanks dude! i'll keep that in mind.

[deathtosellouts]

Haba, haven't finished reading. Try to be more straight-to-the-point and formal. Stick to answering with one main idea, support with two or three sentences.

At least you can use this as a draft, good idea posting for people to edit and give feedback. I think you just had to get all your ideas out, so at least yay people have read it na and you can go straight to business now.

Just put the necessary parts nalang now. Edit accordingly! Good luck, come back, and be really famous!

[pulpfacts]

yeah, i know, i know, sobrang nahirapan rin ako magsulat nito. the string of questions was tiring. thank you for your time! mary moon represent! :D