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pukecrypukecry September 29 2012, 19:00:37 UTC
thank you so much! :D

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hipsterplease September 29 2012, 19:55:08 UTC
oh my god

i loved every word about this. it's perfect!

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pukecrypukecry October 1 2012, 02:01:00 UTC
thanks so much, i'm glad you enjoyed it!!

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exposedwords September 29 2012, 20:19:34 UTC
This is so good. So good. It was really enjoyable, it had me curious the whole time about what was that made Zayn so wary of Louis and then when the revelation came and everything clicked into place, it was great.

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pukecrypukecry October 1 2012, 02:01:24 UTC
thank you so much! i'm glad you thought it worked :D

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dangerbears September 29 2012, 22:29:56 UTC
um???? i'd like to file a complaint???? in that you've ruined me fuckin life????

UM LIKE WHAT I'M ACTUALLY SORT OF BLINKING A LOT BECAUSE MY EYES ARE TINGLING AND WHAT IS THIS?? WHAT IS HUMAN EMOTION???

i hate you BUT I JUST LOVE YOU SO MUCH

i'm clawing at my eyeballs because LOUIS was so fucking BEAUTIFUL and wow actual water is coming from my eyes what. and ZAYN and oh my GOD little baby in love and scared louis and HARRY JUST SO WONDERFUl like that's the only word i have for harry: wonderful. AND ZAYN/NIALL LIKE I SWEAR TO GOD I DON'T EVEN SHIP IT IN THE SLIGHTEST BUT EVERYTHING YOU FUCKING TOUCH TURNS INTO, LIKE, CAKE AND THEN I SHOVE IT ALL IN MY FACE AND NEVER WANT IT TO END

WHY DID THIS END

I LOVE YOU

LIKE IN LOVE WITH YOU

okay.

o k a y.

now you need to write that other thing you told me about because. :)

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pukecrypukecry October 1 2012, 02:02:14 UTC
STOPPPPPPP

and omg i don't even know what to focus on next i will probably have to message you in tears while i rip my hair out because i have TOO MANY FEELINGS

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poor_medea September 30 2012, 01:21:28 UTC
This was lovely. The end bit with Zayn's memories of Louis was just perfect, you could really feel his pain, but also the way he was accepting the new circumstances. Thanks for sharing!

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pukecrypukecry October 1 2012, 02:02:22 UTC
thank you so much!

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