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fic: some nights i'm scared you'll forget me again (3/3)

Sep 29, 2012 14:04

some nights i'm scared you'll forget me again (3/3)

( part 3 )

will i ever write a non-au, one direction, dumb boys being dumb, harry/louis, niall/zayn, 10k-20k

Comments 19

shrdmdnssftw September 30 2012, 04:45:58 UTC

Oh my god, this was so brilliant. Your characterisations are simply perfect and I love the storyline that you drew up.

I felt so angry at Zayn, yet also had so much affection, in the way that he went about looking out for Harry. I think you made him perfectly human, understandable and I felt like Niall was a great counterpoint to the way that Zayn was acting a bit of a dick.

I also really loved the way I could feel the backstory building the whole way through - the undercurrent of something having been between Zayn and Louis, and the heartbreaking point of view that Zayn had held for so long. When Louis confessed to Zayn that he'd loved him - I think my heart both broke and mended a little.

Everything about this was balanced - I felt like there was such a great dynamic between the five boys, and the slow development of Zayn and Niall compared to the sparks of Louis and Harry was wonderful. You're such an amazing writer, and I really enjoyed reading this!

pukecrypukecry October 1 2012, 02:02:48 UTC

oh gosh, thanks so much! i'm really glad you thought it worked and it hit the right emotional note. thank you!

hey_whatsoever September 30 2012, 06:28:20 UTC

So enjoyed this. Didn't see the twist as to why Zayn disliked Louis coming at all, but it worked perfectly.

pukecrypukecry October 1 2012, 02:03:06 UTC

thank you so much! i'm glad you liked it & thought that it worked

rainbowchelita October 3 2012, 10:03:25 UTC

This was beautiful and perfect and everything is good in the world <3

pukecrypukecry October 8 2012, 22:16:02 UTC

ty bb <3

tamzinrose October 4 2012, 00:01:34 UTC

this doesn't have anywhere near as many comments as it deserves

pukecrypukecry October 8 2012, 22:15:52 UTC

ty! :D

jesssmith195 October 8 2012, 01:36:45 UTC

SO. PERFECT. That was a perfect story and I was soo puzzled about what happened with Louis and Zayn to make Zayn hate him so much and I was hoping there was a good explanation because I really didn't want to hate Louis but your story was perfect.

Did I mention this was perfect? Ha.

pukecrypukecry October 8 2012, 22:14:51 UTC

aw thank you so much, i'm rly glad you enjoyed! :D