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A Ring Around 2/?

Jun 17, 2007 17:31

Title: A Ring Around 2/?

Author: puckkit

Rating: PG

Pairing/Character: Mohinder/Sylar

Disclaimer: I do not own these characters or the show Heroes, therefore all of this is false and made up from my charmingly eccentric imagination.

Author's Notes: More thanks to mneiai for her constant help. This is an AU and a multi-parter, spoilers for the first season ( Read more... )

a ring around, sylar, heroes, mohinder

Comments 18

mneiai June 17 2007, 21:26:07 UTC

I think the dream sequence worked really well, there ^.^ Poor Sylar with his fever dreams. You already know how I feel about this awesome AU, so I don't think I need to say more :P

puckkit June 18 2007, 04:35:47 UTC

I'm glad you think so ^^ It was a really good call. I'm really stoked on the next chapter, thanks to you! What would I do without my over-the-internet gratification!

mneiai June 18 2007, 04:42:55 UTC

::bows:: I try. After all, I made need you someday for your free healthcare haha

...AIM said you were on/back, but then you weren't. Are you on? Are you avoiding me? Should I throw a hissy fit and declare jetaimerai as my new gf? ::pout::

puckkit June 18 2007, 04:48:21 UTC

Haha that's right, marraige right away!

AIM was telling the truth. Although I'm headed off to bed, so I didn't stay on. Just got home, drank some water, going for some cake, and decided to respond to some comments.

NEVER! C'mon, lover, you know I'd never do anything to hurt you ^^ *kisses*

kael_raye June 17 2007, 21:42:53 UTC

This is just...so creepy...scary...It scares me! But everything seems to work even with all the creepiness. I really can't wait to read more...

puckkit June 18 2007, 04:36:16 UTC

I'm glad! I want it to ^^

Thank you! I hope you continue to enjoy it.

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puckkit June 18 2007, 04:37:17 UTC

He is a creepy, creepy guy. I agree.

whatwas June 17 2007, 22:24:39 UTC

wow...... sylars dream/nightmare was creepy......
can't wait to see where you go from here....

puckkit June 18 2007, 04:37:35 UTC

Excellent!
I hope it doesn't disappoint!

steamedmirror June 17 2007, 23:49:19 UTC

I think I might be a little afraid of your Mohinder.

I like how disjointed and surreal the dream sequence was -- almost stream-of-consciousness-like. Also, some of the elements were pretty damning even in, or maybe because of, their subtlety, like the child's hand (Molly, I presume). Quite lovely, despite the creepiness.

Btw, the two-lizards-and-a-cockroach (totally a rock band) part amused me. Only 'cause over at peter_mohinder two gay lizards -- lizard!Mo and lizard!Pete -- are sort of the ship's mascots, and the cockroach is obviously Sylar, so... I'm totally a closet PMS shipper, and that made me grin. Sylar even found them inside one!

puckkit June 18 2007, 04:40:26 UTC

I think I'm also a little afraid of my Mohinder.

Thank you! Dream sequences are some of my favourite to write, hands down. You can do so much with them. You notice such strange things, and the things you focus on just become that much bigger. Plus, I'm a huge fan of symbolism and dreams are nothing but. (Good presumption, by the way.)

Best rock band ever! I'm also at peter_mohinder so I may have kinda put that in there. Subtley (or not so much) as a little nod ^^ I'm glad you found it!