A Ring Around 2/?

[puckkit]

Title: A Ring Around 2/?

Author: puckkit

Rating: PG

Pairing/Character: Mohinder/Sylar

Disclaimer: I do not own these characters or the show Heroes, therefore all of this is false and made up from my charmingly eccentric imagination.

Author's Notes: More thanks to mneiai for her constant help. This is an AU and a multi-parter, spoilers for the first season

Comments

[aunt_zelda]

Oh my.
the end kinda confuzzled me (yes I just typed 'confuzzled' - I'm tired and have been watching TV for about three hours) but I liked it. Did Sylar wake up, and was Mohinder reveling in his misery?
Oh well, I liked it, whatever happened.

[puckkit]

Confuzzled is an excellent word, no worries.

It's sort of up for interpretation, so I won't put what I was intending when I wrote it. Consciousness is such a tricky thing- sometimes you think you're in it, sometimes parts from other people who are awake trickle into your dreams, sometimes you are awake and you don't know it. Pick you favourite, I suppose ^^

Thank you! I'm very glad.

[aiisling]

*shivers* That was really creepy. Wonderful, too, though it does make me wonder whether you've been taking something you shouldn't have...XD

[puckkit]

Thank you!

Hee! No ma'am, although a bunch may or may not have been written when I was slightly intoxicated. ^^ Heh.

[thinwhite_duke]

I think I must have died a horrible, lingering death in another life because the concept of one's own body gradually shutting down, growing cold, betraying the life-force contained in it feels both familiar and utterly terrifying to me. You do a damn good job of describing the delirium I imagine could go along with that.

Poor Sylar... Mohinder's an evil cuss... Can't wait to read more of this.

[puckkit]

Oh my! I know the feeling, oddly enough. Although I cringe to think of anyone having to go through that specific feeling. Thanks though! I'm glad it hit the right place ^^

Mohinder is so evil. Though I am amused you said 'poor Sylar' ^___^

Thank you!

[thinwhite_duke]

I have a sick, sick sympathy for a certain villain archetype and Sylar falls right into it, a little too conveniently. I was smitten almost immediately, so, yeah, I get all gushy whenever Sylar's being tormented. All the stuff with him being tested and tortured by Primatech made me all sorts of flail-y, and still does, every time I watch scenes in fanvids and such with Sylar lying there, strapped down, convulsing...

Which is of course why I'm currently in the middle of writing a long fic that pretty much starts off with Sylar in the clutches of those who wish to harm him. :3 Because I'm evil and like to hurt the characters I love... So I'm definitely on-board with the continuation of your fic. :) Keep the punches rollin'!