Proskynesis

[puckkit]

Title: Proskynesis

Author: puckkit

Rating: PG-13 (profanity, suggested sex)

Pairing/Character: Mohinder/Gabriel

Disclaimer: I do not own these characters or the show Heroes, therefore all of this is false and made up from my charmingly eccentric imagination.

Author's Notes: Religious themes (and they're not subtle), AU, no spoilers, no powers.

Comments

[ilsaluvsrick]

I effing loved this. When we met Mama Grey in The Hard part this is soo the fannish interpretation I took; deeply unhappy and devout woman seeking something in God and HIS promise. And of course, Gaberiel would chafe under that, some unknown power pulling his strings.

Loved that even though he isn't Sylar there is still darkness there. So many have fallen in love with woobie Gabe that they forget that the little watchmaker was pretty messed up on his own.

Don't know if it was intentional, but I also love how...unknown Mohinder is. His personality and wishes are so secondary to Gabe's and this makes sense. B/c even if Gaberiel did genuinely like him, he wants a worshipper not a lover.

[puckkit]

Thank you! The Hard Part (so that's what it's called!) killed me with the Ms. Grey encounter. Killed me dead. I took that as well, for sure. There's was something that really drew me to her. She seemed like a wicked character, I'd love to do more with her.

I like Gabriel as a nice regular guy but I just can't see it, or write it convincingly. I feel as though there must be something there that's dark or twisted that just needed the right stimulus to come loose.

I was going for that! I didn't want a lot of focus at all upon Mohinder. I just wanted it to be that he was there and he worked and so Gabriel was just like, what the hell. He'll do. I'm so glad you caught that!

he wants a worshipper not a lover.

Exactly.

[aunt_zelda]

Creepy and very, very good. Sylar likes power ... icky but wonderful!

[puckkit]

Thank you! I like that description- I strive for icky ^^

[whatwas]

this was amazingly powerful and twisted, and perfectly Sylar.....

[puckkit]

Thank you so much! I really appreciate it :)

[catc10]

...PLEASE...
MORE.
That last bit just makes me all shivery and Oooh!!!
ME

[puckkit]

Thank you!

I'm afraid there probably won't be more of this sort of series, but I'm working on some others. So there will be more in general ^^

I'm glad it had that effect on you! Hee! :)

[catc10]

Aw, damn! Well, I'll be happy to read more of your talent in any case!
ME

[puckkit]

Thank you! I'm glad you think so :)