[oneshot] Lovedrunk or Hungover?

Oct 11, 2009 14:36

Title: Lovedrunk or hungover?
Author: puchu_pucha
Pairing: HanChul
Rating: 15
Genre: Angst, slight smut
Length: oneshot
Disclaimer: Their way and my way are parallel
Summary: As time passes by, everything along with everyone needs to grow up.

A/N: This is my first time writing a fic in English. Hope that it isn’t a fail. Plz comment to help me ( Read more... )

gerne: angst, oneshot, gerne: smut, pairing: hanchul

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eonis23 October 11 2009, 08:48:32 UTC
Spot!!!! XDXDXD

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eonis23 October 11 2009, 09:14:02 UTC
Finally!! I've been waiting for this fic since yesterday!! :333 Actually, since the time you said that you will write an english fic!!! :33333333

That goodbye letter part, really heartbreaking me.

It's so angsty and I can't even stop my tears right now T^T

And unnie, I will never hug you again if you keep saying that this is a fail!!! It's so so so so so good!!!!!!!!!! >_And I should say that... Hankyung, I know it's hard to choose between your secret lover that you love so much, and your wife and kid. You really make two (three) person's heart break... Heechul's, yours, and mine that love you guys so much...*sigh ( ... )

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puchu_pucha October 11 2009, 09:58:56 UTC
Oh really? I was nervous with the first fic you know *blush*

Yeah, it's so sad but actually I have cut out some depressing scenes XD...And it's still that sad! Hmmmm ~~~>__<~~~

I'm scared of love like this, when love and responsibility are incompatible T___T

I wonder if you had watched a Korean drama named "Autumn Rain". It's my inspiration although it was broadcasted years ago. The acutely mournful ending possessed me much =.=

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eonis23 October 11 2009, 10:17:39 UTC
Really, it's so good...XD

You cut the depressing scenes? And it still so sad for me...T^T I wonder how hard I will cry if that depressing scenes aren't being cut...XD

Yeah, love like this is so scary....>_< I don't know what should I do if I face things like that...

No, I haven't watch that movie yet...>_< And now you're making me curious!!! XD

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jia028 October 11 2009, 09:02:56 UTC
:((
that was sad.!!!

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puchu_pucha October 11 2009, 10:00:18 UTC
Yeah I know it's quite depressing =.=
Anyway, thanks dearie~!!!! ^^

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followurdestiny October 11 2009, 13:52:30 UTC
so sad, but it's beautifully written <333
HanChul T_T

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puchu_pucha October 11 2009, 15:32:29 UTC
Thanks for reading and commenting sweetie XD
My first fis is angsty right? But don't worry coz I have plan for a fluffy one LOL

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silverxhoshi October 12 2009, 00:38:44 UTC
It was so sad but I loved the ending! T.T

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puchu_pucha October 12 2009, 03:51:11 UTC
Thanks dearie <333
The original ending wasn't like that but I've changed it...glad that ur pleased with my new one^^

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vallovesyou October 12 2009, 20:42:08 UTC
Waaaaaaaaaaaaaaaah~!!! so sad~~~ T.T But but... in the ending, did Heechul come back to Hankyung?!?!? or they never got together again1?!

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puchu_pucha October 13 2009, 02:24:37 UTC
The ending is italic, which means it's the past. Actually it's the first time Hankyung saw Heechul XD

Maybe they never met again? Or would they? Ah Val you inspired me of a sequel LOL

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vallovesyou October 13 2009, 02:32:50 UTC
Ohhh~ okie :))

HAHHAHA~~!! u know what.... make a sequel~!!! wonder why??? Well, u know that my audition is coming up and I was dancing (not my routine but just.... dancing for practice and techniques). I was doing a jump. The jump is one leg is extended straight down and one leg is kicked back, a little bit bent but it's stil extended. My back is arched and both my arms are pushed back and raised up. Both my feet are pointed so u could say that it's like a ballet/jazz jump... However, I ALWAYS use my laptop during practice because all my songs are there... and my messenger is always on... While I was doing that jump, I was just about to jump, the alarm for the message appeared and it was so loud that I looked at my laptop and I almost fell flat down on the floor :)) so damnit, make a sequel~! u almost caused me my face :))

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puchu_pucha October 13 2009, 14:24:36 UTC
The jump sounds dangerous @_@
Oh that was close, I'm sorry T___T

Maybe I'll write a sequel but not now coz I have plan for at least 2 fluffy fics XDXDXD

I was tired to death when I finished this fic...its sadness secretly sneaked into my mind and overlaid me with dark clouds ~~~>__<~~~

I should take a break before start another one <3

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