Wow. I usually skip half the AUs I see (without even checking the content) but that habit of mine is definitely a bad one because wow. Your storyline was so well-built, with several big surprises, it's making me regret ever skipping an AU ! I really admire you for coming up with this universe and describing all adventurous steps in a way that made me *feel* the suspense. I really like the way you fit (almost) all KAT-TUN members in here, it was interesting! Here are some quotes that held my attention particular :
But this… this is different. Jin used to be the one to watch Kame’s back. A nice and touching introduction to the trust they used to share ❤ ;_;
Kame glares at Jin. Shh. Jin’s eyes widen slightly in response. What? It was just a question. I loved that they could communicate without talking xD. Cute. They do know each other well enough xD.
Kame tilts his head and gives Jin a mild smile There, a first smile, a first step ❤.
It’s hard to focus on the job when Jin is there, looking at him like that. It’s hard to focus on
( ... )
It gathers everything I love in Akame fic hahaha. Hot fighting then cooperating Akame with past issues is one of the best haha. I was so frustrated that it was just a three-parts story, I really hope you'll write the previous chapters someday ! Like the beggining of their story and all~ It would be so fun to read ! The way they've got to know each other in the agency, the way they fell in love, had sex, lovers moments then fights, and of course the final time Jin betrayed Kame and how it turned his heart upside down~ I'd love to know more about it ! I felt like watching a really good spy movie or serie (like the serie 'Nikita' by exemple) while reading this, I loved it !
I loved this story from start to end, it really was well-written and so smooth that I couldn't stop reading for one moment ! Thank you for this ! <33
I can't wait to know the name of the authors so that I can read more of you ! ^O^ Please keep on with the amazing work !
i FINALLY had time to read this ! strong joker game vibes here and it also reminded me of In His Care :D in a way it felt like this is in the future haha altho Kame's character is bit different here. but comparing aside, I loved it. it had drive and at the end lots of looooove <3 altho me being Kame I'd also shot that son of a bitch even tho his intentions were good tsk tsk ..i guess it's good Kame loves him so much and can forgive him haha :D
also as Lempi mentioned - this killed me ahahah :D I can so imagine that :DDD "Kame glares at Jin. Shh. Jin’s eyes widen slightly in response. What? It was just a question."
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Your storyline was so well-built, with several big surprises, it's making me regret ever skipping an AU !
I really admire you for coming up with this universe and describing all adventurous steps in a way that made me *feel* the suspense.
I really like the way you fit (almost) all KAT-TUN members in here, it was interesting!
Here are some quotes that held my attention particular :
But this… this is different. Jin used to be the one to watch Kame’s back.
A nice and touching introduction to the trust they used to share ❤ ;_;
Kame glares at Jin. Shh.
Jin’s eyes widen slightly in response. What? It was just a question.
I loved that they could communicate without talking xD. Cute. They do know each other well enough xD.
Kame tilts his head and gives Jin a mild smile
There, a first smile, a first step ❤.
It’s hard to focus on the job when Jin is there, looking at him like that. It’s hard to focus on ( ... )
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It gathers everything I love in Akame fic hahaha. Hot fighting then cooperating Akame with past issues is one of the best haha. I was so frustrated that it was just a three-parts story, I really hope you'll write the previous chapters someday ! Like the beggining of their story and all~ It would be so fun to read ! The way they've got to know each other in the agency, the way they fell in love, had sex, lovers moments then fights, and of course the final time Jin betrayed Kame and how it turned his heart upside down~ I'd love to know more about it ! I felt like watching a really good spy movie or serie (like the serie 'Nikita' by exemple) while reading this, I loved it !
I loved this story from start to end, it really was well-written and so smooth that I couldn't stop reading for one moment ! Thank you for this ! <33
I can't wait to know the name of the authors so that I can read more of you ! ^O^ Please keep on with the amazing work !
Chuu~~ xxx
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but comparing aside, I loved it. it had drive and at the end lots of looooove <3 altho me being Kame I'd also shot that son of a bitch even tho his intentions were good tsk tsk ..i guess it's good Kame loves him so much and can forgive him haha :D
also as Lempi mentioned - this killed me ahahah :D I can so imagine that :DDD
"Kame glares at Jin. Shh.
Jin’s eyes widen slightly in response. What? It was just a question."
thank you for writting this <3
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