Wow. I usually skip half the AUs I see (without even checking the content) but that habit of mine is definitely a bad one because wow. Your storyline was so well-built, with several big surprises, it's making me regret ever skipping an AU ! I really admire you for coming up with this universe and describing all adventurous steps in a way that made me *feel* the suspense. I really like the way you fit (almost) all KAT-TUN members in here, it was interesting! Here are some quotes that held my attention particular :
But this… this is different. Jin used to be the one to watch Kame’s back. A nice and touching introduction to the trust they used to share ❤ ;_;
Kame glares at Jin. Shh. Jin’s eyes widen slightly in response. What? It was just a question. I loved that they could communicate without talking xD. Cute. They do know each other well enough xD.
Kame tilts his head and gives Jin a mild smile There, a first smile, a first step ❤.
It’s hard to focus on the job when Jin is there, looking at him like that. It’s hard to focus on much of anything. It would be hard for anyone who had Jin staring at them like that xD *_*
“It was me or you.” I was confused when I saw this... I thought I'd missed the explanation or hadn't understood it... but then I got it. The explanation was coming later, they viscerally needed to share a moment first xD.
Jin seems to be waiting, but Kame isn’t sure what he’s waiting for. Courage, maybe. Sense. I liked this. Courage ❤. Sense ❤.
Everything sinks. For a moment, Kame can’t breathe. *insert lady gaga keyboard-smashing tweet* (...sorry if you don't use twitter and this makes no sense xD) Daaaamn.
“I don’t care what’s fucking easy,” Kame snaps. “You should have told me the truth.” T________T 💔💔💔
“I’m sorry,” Jin murmurs, his eyes softening. “I wanted to. I really did.” T_________T ❤❤❤
“What?” Kame says. It’s cold, deep in his stomach. Cold, and growing colder That was fucking unexpected aaaahhh T____T AAAAAAHHH *INSERT THAT TWEET BUT THIS TIME IN ANGRY-AT-JIN/BROKENHEARTED MODE* Kudos to you author for coming up with a storyline that really makes our feelings get carried away as if we were on a roller coaster. *insert Nakamaru scream*.
Another shot. Searing pain in Kame’s leg as it collapses under him, but that’s nothing compared to how he feels everywhere else. T_______T poor Kame. Poor Kame !!!
“Can you come with me for a sec?” Takizawa asks, motioning down the hall. Kame tenses slightly. Takki please save them. Takki is supposed to be the mediator. Be their mediator please ;____;
“It’s simpler than you think,” Takizawa says Yaaas he's gonna do it !!!
When he looks back at Jin, a little more of the wariness has fallen away, softened. I've softened too ❤❤
“I love you,” Jin says, quietly into Kame’s hair ❤❤❤❤❤❤ ;___; ❤❤❤❤ I loved that.
Kame can hear the grin, feel the laugh against his skin. It feels raw and vulnerable, like new skin over an old wound Maaan I loved loved loved this. "New skin over an old wound". Jin will take care of you, Kame ❤. He'll spread his love all over you, and I mean that in an innocent way ❤.
There’s a happy little sigh when Kame complies. Yeah well reader-me is having a happy little sigh too and I'm sure all other readers too ❤. I love this sentence too ❤.
Congrats and thank you for writing this ! Coming up with a whole adventure plot sounds like a hard thing to do, and like I said, I really liked the way you described the adventure/ action moments. I instantly tweeted that I felt like I was watching a nice James Bond movie because that was what I felt like. Impressive !! Sincere congrats.
Your storyline was so well-built, with several big surprises, it's making me regret ever skipping an AU !
I really admire you for coming up with this universe and describing all adventurous steps in a way that made me *feel* the suspense.
I really like the way you fit (almost) all KAT-TUN members in here, it was interesting!
Here are some quotes that held my attention particular :
But this… this is different. Jin used to be the one to watch Kame’s back.
A nice and touching introduction to the trust they used to share ❤ ;_;
Kame glares at Jin. Shh.
Jin’s eyes widen slightly in response. What? It was just a question.
I loved that they could communicate without talking xD. Cute. They do know each other well enough xD.
Kame tilts his head and gives Jin a mild smile
There, a first smile, a first step ❤.
It’s hard to focus on the job when Jin is there, looking at him like that. It’s hard to focus on much of anything.
It would be hard for anyone who had Jin staring at them like that xD *_*
“It was me or you.”
I was confused when I saw this... I thought I'd missed the explanation or hadn't understood it... but then I got it. The explanation was coming later, they viscerally needed to share a moment first xD.
Jin seems to be waiting, but Kame isn’t sure what he’s waiting for. Courage, maybe. Sense.
I liked this. Courage ❤. Sense ❤.
Everything sinks. For a moment, Kame can’t breathe.
*insert lady gaga keyboard-smashing tweet*
(...sorry if you don't use twitter and this makes no sense xD)
Daaaamn.
“I don’t care what’s fucking easy,” Kame snaps. “You should have told me the truth.”
T________T
💔💔💔
“I’m sorry,” Jin murmurs, his eyes softening. “I wanted to. I really did.”
T_________T
❤❤❤
“What?” Kame says. It’s cold, deep in his stomach. Cold, and growing colder
That was fucking unexpected aaaahhh T____T AAAAAAHHH *INSERT THAT TWEET BUT THIS TIME IN ANGRY-AT-JIN/BROKENHEARTED MODE*
Kudos to you author for coming up with a storyline that really makes our feelings get carried away as if we were on a roller coaster. *insert Nakamaru scream*.
Another shot. Searing pain in Kame’s leg as it collapses under him, but that’s nothing compared to how he feels everywhere else.
T_______T poor Kame. Poor Kame !!!
“Can you come with me for a sec?” Takizawa asks, motioning down the hall.
Kame tenses slightly.
Takki please save them.
Takki is supposed to be the mediator. Be their mediator please ;____;
“It’s simpler than you think,” Takizawa says
Yaaas he's gonna do it !!!
When he looks back at Jin, a little more of the wariness has fallen away, softened.
I've softened too ❤❤
“I love you,” Jin says, quietly into Kame’s hair
❤❤❤❤❤❤ ;___; ❤❤❤❤
I loved that.
Kame can hear the grin, feel the laugh against his skin. It feels raw and vulnerable, like new skin over an old wound
Maaan I loved loved loved this. "New skin over an old wound". Jin will take care of you, Kame ❤. He'll spread his love all over you, and I mean that in an innocent way ❤.
There’s a happy little sigh when Kame complies.
Yeah well reader-me is having a happy little sigh too and I'm sure all other readers too ❤.
I love this sentence too ❤.
Congrats and thank you for writing this !
Coming up with a whole adventure plot sounds like a hard thing to do, and like I said, I really liked the way you described the adventure/ action moments. I instantly tweeted that I felt like I was watching a nice James Bond movie because that was what I felt like. Impressive !!
Sincere congrats.
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