creative writing assignment

[psychobizyatch]

For my intro to creative writing class, we have to write a description of our faces. I'm not too certain if mine sounds decent enough, so I'd appreciate any feedback. Here it goes

Comments

interesting!

[anonymous]

The description is rather interesting. All I'd like to say is, it would sound a little more positive if you humoured the way your face looks rather than sounding unhappy with your appearence.
Other than that it's hilarious!