creative writing assignment
For my intro to creative writing class, we have to write a description of our faces. I'm not too certain if mine sounds decent enough, so I'd appreciate any feedback. Here it goes:
There's this pasty complexion sprinkled with bumpy blemishes-obvious flaws in a world that demands impossible perfection. Planted in the center of this chalky mess are small, milk chocolate orbs of emotion; frankly, they remind me of the color of shit. Further downward rests a boring, bland sniffing machine. Its smooth, uninterrupted surface gives way to no personality whatsoever. A little below that lies pale pink petals that have tasted bursts of true affection.
There's this pasty complexion sprinkled with bumpy blemishes-obvious flaws in a world that demands impossible perfection. Planted in the center of this chalky mess are small, milk chocolate orbs of emotion; frankly, they remind me of the color of shit. Further downward rests a boring, bland sniffing machine. Its smooth, uninterrupted surface gives way to no personality whatsoever. A little below that lies pale pink petals that have tasted bursts of true affection.