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Oct 13, 2009 22:51

I know, right? Two posts in one night, what is this shit? I'm actually a little embarrassed that this is going to be my first contribution to the glory that is the Merlin fandom. It was trying to be a drabble and a half, but I couldn't even do that right, so it's got no official structure, it's just very, very short ( Read more... )

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tetsubinatu October 14 2009, 06:32:49 UTC
But it's so adorable! *squishes Arthur*

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psuedo_catalyst October 14 2009, 18:03:35 UTC
Thanks! ...he's just too sweet.

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lady_drace October 14 2009, 08:47:27 UTC
Fluff! *melting slowly*

Wonderful. Just wonderful. :o)

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psuedo_catalyst October 14 2009, 18:04:05 UTC
thanks so much, I'm glad you liked it!

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just_ann_now October 14 2009, 10:02:20 UTC
Merlin loves him, though, in that frightening, all encompassing way that warms Arthur to his core. Merlin sees through all his faults and weaknesses to the man he could be, and loves him just for trying

I didn't find it fluffy at all! I like the way you show Arthur recognizing and accepting Merlin's unconditional love, and the implication of his committing himself to becoming the man and king that Merlin envisions. Very well done.

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psuedo_catalyst October 14 2009, 18:06:23 UTC
Thanks so much! I wrote it all in a rush (is there any other way to write something so short?) and then sat and looked at it and hoped it seemed in-character to anybody but me.

So glad you liked it.

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just_ann_now October 14 2009, 18:18:47 UTC
is there any other way to write something so short?

Hee. The first year or so that I wrote, all I wrote was drabbles, for the challenges at tolkien_weekly, and I'd spend a whole week polishing and perfecting each one. I still don't write stuff that's much longer - my longest story ever is around 12,000 words, and my co-author is responsible for a third of it - but sometimes things can knocked off quickly,like a pencil sketch, and other times we have the leisure to be slow and careful, like a miniaturist's work.

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phys_nut October 14 2009, 10:03:44 UTC
awwww!! *squishes* that was beautiful!! poor arthur! poor merlin! they're so wonderful!

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psuedo_catalyst October 14 2009, 18:07:45 UTC
thank you so much! Aren't they just? The more I watch the show (season one, at least), the more obviously canon they seem, and I just couldn't resist them any longer!

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archaeologist_d October 14 2009, 12:39:34 UTC
That was lovely. Great job in getting into Arthur's head.

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psuedo_catalyst October 14 2009, 18:07:59 UTC
Thank you so much!

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