It Just Comes Natural, by the_astronomer, Wes/Eric

Oct 19, 2006 01:04

Ha! I've created a monster. This is number two in the PRSW7. And it actually has continuity with 'Glasses.' And yet again I was supposed to be doing homework. Procrastination is my friend. I really should spend more time on these, but 45 minutes seems to be the average time for my stuff. We'll see what happens. The title is from the new George ( Read more... )

wes/eric, the astronomer, obsessive

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cmar_wingnut October 19 2006, 11:36:00 UTC
Hah, very cute! I like obsessive!Wes, and the line about 'every day he doesn't try to kill me is good' really cracked me up. Above and beyond the Wes/Eric-ness, you captured the panic attack feeling of a first date with someone you really, really like and want to impress very well.

One teeny-weeny correction: it should be 'More time for Eric and me'.

Speaking of which, do we get to see the date and the time alone later?

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the_astronomer October 19 2006, 13:44:21 UTC
It seems as though my cuteness time is after Midnight. I figured Wes would find it oddly comforting that Eric, who previously tried many times to hurt/kill him, stopped all of that. It's not exactly something you forget about. And I had me written there, but my weird 1 AM brain changed it, so I'll fix that....

I was going to try and write the date scene last night, but in order to do it justice I have to wait for more time. So yes, the date and time alone will be written. I haven't quite figured out how to approach it, but something will come to me. Thanks for the review!

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cmar_wingnut October 19 2006, 14:27:02 UTC
Ah yes, sometimes inspiration is set free when one is tired/sleepy/drunk/sick/whatever. The result is what counts! :)

Actually I don't think Eric ever tried to kill Wes. Hurt, yes, but not kill. At least not seriously, unless I missed something.

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the_astronomer October 19 2006, 16:27:36 UTC
Not kill him directly I suppose, but almost letting him fall into a huge pit in the earth kind of counts. And the way I see it, Eric never really wanted to hurt Wes. It was more of he didn't have anyone/thing else to take out his anger on, so what better than the source of frustration? I think the threats were empty. Their whole relationship just really made me want to see the stuff between End of Time and Reinforcements. Wouldn't that have been wonderful?

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mzdany October 19 2006, 23:52:14 UTC
He, he, he, never argue Time Force with Cmar...;)
Very nice ficlet. I really like the inner dialogue, it sounds almost frantic.
I would also very much like to see the 'date'.
Really good job!

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the_astronomer October 20 2006, 00:37:36 UTC
How idiotic of me to argue with the Queen when I am but a lowly servant. :) I did picture Wes sort of pacing around in his room and coming close to freak-out mode a few times. That's always good for a laugh, 'cause I know how that feels all too well (school-wise at least). And don't worry, the date is coming for sure. And the alone time after. What will happen though is a mystery to you and I both. Thanks for reading and liking it!

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welleg August 7 2007, 04:56:39 UTC
Great story.

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