Comments | prsw22: Strangers in Red, by cmar and germankitty, Jason/Tommy, Wes/Eric, Jason/Eric

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Strangers in Red, by cmar and germankitty, Jason/Tommy, Wes/Eric, Jason/Eric

Oct 18, 2006 12:57

Title: Strangers in Red
Chapter: Closed Doors
Authors: cmar and germankitty
Relationships: Jason/Tommy, Wes/Eric, Jason/Eric
Rating: R
Warning: Strong sexuality, language

( Chapter 5: Behind closed doors... )

jason/eric, photograph, wes/eric, jason/tommy, germankitty, cmar

Comments 11

koulagirl666 October 18 2006, 14:38:55 UTC

*blink* Wow. Well I don't know what I was expecting but that was sure as hell worse. Ow. That's an uncomfortable way to find out how one's emotions are working against you. I'm sure Jason was pretty well confused as well, yet it's amazing how their reasons are so similar. Perhaps that's why they were attracted to each other in the first place, and that night resonates with them now.

germankitty October 18 2006, 14:46:19 UTC

It's funny how both our visions of Eric and Jason gelled together on this and made it all work. And yeah, it did have resonances ... as you'll find out in the next chapters. :)

Am I correct in assuming that your "wow" means you liked it still? :) If so, thanks!

koulagirl666 October 18 2006, 14:48:56 UTC

Am I correct in assuming that your "wow" means you liked it still? :) If so, thanks!

You are most definitely correct, and you're welcome.

cmar_wingnut October 18 2006, 16:17:42 UTC

Thanks! Yeah, the 'strangers' theme sort of came together out of both our concepts of the characters, as germankitty said, and also the parallels between Eric's and Jason's feelings on that night and between the interactions of the two serious couples in the story.

I have to say I'm curious what people were expecting - but glad that this seems to have been a surprise!

mzdany October 21 2006, 03:17:43 UTC

More UST! Poor guys! But I was glad to see that Eric didn't try to push Jason into doing what he wasn't comfortable with doing. Frustrating for both of them, though.
I really like the subtle threads of Eric's changing perspective at being strangers - and how you've solidified that in his explanation to Wes at the end. Very well done!
I am really looking forward to the infamous meeting now!
Great job, ladies!

germankitty October 22 2006, 17:28:53 UTC

Thanks. :) And who is writing UST?!? Certainly not us??? *looks innocent*

(A word of warning, maybe ... don't drink when reading the last chapter!)

sunfire1216 October 21 2006, 14:43:20 UTC

Eric finally grew up! I'm stunned and thrilled and...speechless.

Great job.

germankitty October 22 2006, 17:29:36 UTC

I hope that's a good thing? :) Anyway, thanks!

sunfire1216 October 23 2006, 05:15:35 UTC

Yeah, it's a good thing. :)

welleg August 7 2007, 03:56:28 UTC

Another great chapter. I felt really bad for Jason when Eric up and left.

germankitty August 7 2007, 07:42:46 UTC

Thanks. Eric could be an ass if he put his mind to it ....