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Anniversary Challenge - Week 2

Sep 14, 2011 22:01

Title: Worlds Apart (Part 2/4)
Verse: TFA
Rating: PG
Characters: Prowl and Jazz, Yoketron, Ratchet, Arcee, Optimus
Warnings: takes place after season three (Prowl is dead)

( Worlds Apart )

multi chapter, anniversary challenge 11, angst, poster: sideslip_tf, tf-animated, rated pg

Comments 6

darksirocco September 15 2011, 08:41:12 UTC

*sighs* poor Jazz...but, at least he's got Op to keep him preoccupied for awhile. still... the bonding was sweet, and a very nice touch.
this is a lovely chapter, so painfully poignant, bittersweet. excellent work!
-Siro

sideslip_tf September 16 2011, 03:28:27 UTC

Thank you. Optimus is concerned about Jazz but understands how he feels. I thought the bonding would be a nice contrast between what Jazz wished he had and what his reality is.

Oh, even though it wasn't in the story, Optimus was happy to dance with Jazz.

darksirocco September 17 2011, 06:09:01 UTC

very much so! the contrast is lovely. :)
and it's wonderful that Op is there for Jazz when he needs him. oh, i would love to've seen that dance!
-Siro

renegadewriter8 September 15 2011, 12:41:55 UTC

Poor Jazz! T.T I hope Prowl finds a way back or something.

sideslip_tf September 16 2011, 03:30:27 UTC

Jazz is lonely without Prowl but he does have his friends.

Hopefully there will be more insight to Prowl's POV in the next chapter.

fianna9 September 29 2011, 10:18:17 UTC

I like the line about the other Primes being too scared to dance with Optimus. The contrast between Jazz and Prowl is well written.