Challenge response

[fianna9]

I’ve watched you grow…
By: Fianna9
Prompt: Surprising origin
Verse: G1/AU
Rating: PG13
Warnings: mentions of violence, mature themes, het, slash and threesomes; Cybertronian cursing
Summary: the contemplations of a carrier at her creation’s bonding celebration

This is my first time posting anything to a forum; constructive criticism is welcome. Thank you

Comments

[darksirocco]

oh, but this is so introspective and lovely! and Red and Inferno taking them in, and building a life for all of them, oh! so sweet! *sighs contentedly*
very well done!
-Siro =^.^=

[fianna9]

Thank you. That's what I was trying for. I'm happy it worked.

[renegadewriter8]

Wow that was surprising! I loved this! Very touching and well written! Good job!

[fianna9]

I'm glad you enjoyed it. Thank you for reviewing it.

[gwenithcoy]

[fianna9]

The twists and turns were fun to keep track of while writing, especially making certain that who was being referenced was being kept straight. I'm glad you enjoyed it.

[bluebirdsoaring]

Very interesting POV and certainly not twists I've seen before!! Great job =)

[fianna9]

The bunny dodged my cat and snagged me while I was reading about the Combaticons. The rest of the story grew from there. Thanks.

[thalanee]

Very interesting and very well written!
The twist in this story were awesome!

[fianna9]

Thank you.