Stay, but you'll walk away.

Apr 13, 2007 17:41


Stay, but you’ll walk away

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The screen of Alex’s TV exploded into a million pieces as he threw his empty beer-bottle right at it. The anger in him was so unbelievable, he wanted to kill someone, hit something, scream out all he wanted, he clenched his fists and hit them into the wall, one of his pictures smashing down to the floor.

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anonymous April 14 2007, 04:10:58 UTC
I'm not going to lie, I didn't really like the ending. I love the way that you write but with this story I think you should had a happy ending, this is fiction, and it appears that all the readers want a happy ending, but you won't give it to us. Your writing is fabulous, I love the attention to detail, but like I said I could have done without the ending. If you do end up writing a better ending I would really like it, and I'm sure all your other friends would to.

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