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fic: Please Don't Take My Sunshine Away

Feb 01, 2012 19:15

Title: Please Don’t Take My Sunshine Away
Beta: pinkeuphoria1
Pairing: Hiroto/Nao
Word count:1,400
Rating: PG
Genre: Tragedy, Angst, Gen
Warnings: Former death of a character and a seriously ill child.
Notes: My beta is being slow because we both forget that she has stuff to beta XD Just hope we won’t keep forgetting (I’ve got so many important school assignment ( Read more... )

genre: tragedy, pairing: hiroto/nao, genre: general, rating: pg, format: one-shot, genre: angst

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pinkeuphoria1 February 1 2012, 17:18:46 UTC

HAVE MY HEART

prologuesized February 1 2012, 17:21:25 UTC

EW I DON'T WANT IT :( I WANT MY FICS, BETA'D ♥

pinkeuphoria1 February 1 2012, 17:22:42 UTC

PFFFFFF UNGRATEFUL

prologuesized February 1 2012, 17:23:21 UTC

I AM GRATEFUL ♥ YOU'RE JUST SLOW.

elanielyn February 1 2012, 17:47:52 UTC

If I wasn't too sleep to cry I'd probably be bawling my eyes out. So yeah. Hiroto. With babies. NOW WRITE THE HAPPY VERSION.

prologuesized February 1 2012, 17:50:09 UTC

...I'LL TRY SOMEDAY? ;;_______; I seriously have no time to write now asdgfhjkl. Still working on the Maths essay. It's the middle of exam week too, so I have to study. And fill uni application stuff. And stuff. Writing will have to wait. I'm already scared about missing the deadlines for the exchanges...

Remind me in the summer? ;;A; *squishes* Thank you for reading~

wintersdancer February 1 2012, 18:09:32 UTC

The last line ♥
Also, Hiroto is one of my fav characters by Kame and I love how you write him ♥

prologuesized February 1 2012, 18:12:06 UTC

He's one of my favourites too ♥ And probably one of the ones I can relate to the most. Asdfghjkl I felt like I was under a great amount of pressure when writing him... I kind of avoid writing him because he's a character I just really don't want to screw up XD But I'm glad you found his characterization good?

Thank you for reading ♥

crazyfaucet February 1 2012, 18:27:57 UTC

Jdklfadkjflkzad <3 Nao/Hiroto! /is off to read right now!!!!

crazyfaucet February 1 2012, 19:01:54 UTC

READ IT! LOVED IT! Now to go cry in my little corner here in the library XP So, does his cute little girl have leukimia too?

prologuesized February 1 2012, 19:10:17 UTC

I'm really happy that you liked it! :D Yes, I was thinking about leukemia ;;________; Asdfghjkl I kind of had even more story for daddy!Hiroto and his daughter buuuut there never was time to write it XD I guess I won't, it's been ages since I wrote this.

Thank you for reading ♥

crazyfaucet February 1 2012, 20:12:42 UTC

;_____; There needs to be more daddy!hiroto and daughter someday then!

LOL! slow beta is slow but she does such a fabulous job! I read another fic that she betaed and I was almost in tears! (oh look ! i was sitting in the same library! LOL!)

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chained_akame February 1 2012, 20:27:46 UTC

T_______________T WHY OH WHY DID I HAVE TO READ THIS NOW?

Really, I can take many heart-breaking fics from you, but not Hiroto-related ones T___T I remember how I spent the whole drama afraid that Nao would die in the end...and well,you brought that feeling back. But it's ok. Because you also brought a tiny sweet creature that totally fits in Hiroto's image and you wrote both her and him so well...

I can't say anything else. It's better to end the comment here, instead of filling in with incoherent nonsense. I still love it from the bottom of my heart,though <3 <3 <3 <3 <3

prologuesized February 1 2012, 22:44:28 UTC

I was so nervous about writing Hiroto. I've avoided seriously writing him because I'm always scared I'll screw up his character. I don't want to do that, because... he's kind of special to me? I can relate to him. I really want to make justice for him :<

I'm sorry I brought up your fears of Nao dying ':D Oopsie~ It just fit with this sad, tragic little oneshot.

Thank you very much for commenting again ♥♥♥ Love you too!

chained_akame February 2 2012, 10:20:29 UTC

Haha I know. I tried to write Hiroto just once and even if I'm dying to write him again, I'm not touching him.

I just felt it was so obvious she would die in the drama. I really don't know why. And this was the reason I was more than excited with the ending. SO when I read this, I went all T____T But it's ok. Because the little girl made up for it^^

prologuesized February 2 2012, 17:55:14 UTC

Owww D: ...He's been as a minor character in my Kame/Kame fic but... Uh. That was very... superficial. Writing him seriously is scary, so I get your fear .____. Then again, practice makes it easier to find the fitting way to write a character ♥

That's weird, I never did XDDD Aww, at least you got a happy ending for the drama then! Asdghkl they so deserve a sweet little child.

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