fic: Please Don't Take My Sunshine Away

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Title: Please Don’t Take My Sunshine Away
Beta: pinkeuphoria1
Pairing: Hiroto/Nao
Word count:1,400
Rating: PG
Genre: Tragedy, Angst, Gen
Warnings: Former death of a character and a seriously ill child.
Notes: My beta is being slow because we both forget that she has stuff to beta XD Just hope we won’t keep forgetting (I’ve got so many important school assignment

Comments

[chained_akame]

T_______________T WHY OH WHY DID I HAVE TO READ THIS NOW?

Really, I can take many heart-breaking fics from you, but not Hiroto-related ones T___T I remember how I spent the whole drama afraid that Nao would die in the end...and well,you brought that feeling back. But it's ok. Because you also brought a tiny sweet creature that totally fits in Hiroto's image and you wrote both her and him so well...

I can't say anything else. It's better to end the comment here, instead of filling in with incoherent nonsense. I still love it from the bottom of my heart,though <3 <3 <3 <3 <3

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I was so nervous about writing Hiroto. I've avoided seriously writing him because I'm always scared I'll screw up his character. I don't want to do that, because... he's kind of special to me? I can relate to him. I really want to make justice for him :<

I'm sorry I brought up your fears of Nao dying ':D Oopsie~ It just fit with this sad, tragic little oneshot.

Thank you very much for commenting again ♥♥♥ Love you too!

[chained_akame]

Haha I know. I tried to write Hiroto just once and even if I'm dying to write him again, I'm not touching him.

I just felt it was so obvious she would die in the drama. I really don't know why. And this was the reason I was more than excited with the ending. SO when I read this, I went all T____T But it's ok. Because the little girl made up for it^^

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Owww D: ...He's been as a minor character in my Kame/Kame fic but... Uh. That was very... superficial. Writing him seriously is scary, so I get your fear .____. Then again, practice makes it easier to find the fitting way to write a character ♥

That's weird, I never did XDDD Aww, at least you got a happy ending for the drama then! Asdghkl they so deserve a sweet little child.

[chained_akame]

That's true. But Hiroto is truly a character that people like me who can't write well shouldn't touch xD

Haha I don't know,it was at the scene where Hiroto talked with his brother and he told him that he could give his heart for him and he wouldn't mind dying for him and I was like "OMG Don't tell me that Nao's health will go wrong again and in the end Hiroto will die for her, will become her donor etc"...there was quite the drama in the plot,so I just couldn't sit still xD

And yes, they deserve a cute little child...we can just imagine that they did^^

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Pffff. Everyone can touch anything ♥ ...Unless you lack intellect for some super genius character and try to write something epic... Then it's... awkward XD But those cases are pretty rare.

ASDFGHJKL I NEVER PAID ATTENTION TO THAT XDD I guess that'd create some panic?

Yes ♥ ...Although because of this fic I'm going to have to work on shaking the image of Nao dying and Hiroto taking care of a sick child all alone... *headdesk* Sometimes writing isn't all that good...

[chained_akame]

No,I never tried to write sth epic. I just know I'm gonna fail xD

It depends on the person...after all, HitoKoi was a drama I watched during my first year into jdrama...I still didn't know how to judge some situations xD

Well maybe you could write a sequel where the kid is healthy and cured^^

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I avoid it too... I don't have the brains and motivation XD

...I hate writing sequels XDD I feel like I'm ruining the original story. Occasionally I like sequels but pfff not always. If I'd write something to this verse, I'd probably write it before this moment here. Because as an author I know some more background stuff ♥

[chained_akame]

Aw,so we match. I don't like sequels either xD Even if the story has no definite end, I still don't like a sequel xD I just mentioned it as an idea to cure the image you had but didn't like xD