fic: Sync

Oct 06, 2011 23:26

Title: Sync
Author: prologuesized
Beta: pinkeuphoria1
Pairing: Jin/Kame
Rating: PG
Genre: AU, Angst, General
Notes: I was bored and I wanted to do something short. Yuppie. I don’t even know.
Word count: 1,000

Summary: Jin makes a doll. The doll has emotions.

They’re going to cut the electricity this week, they warned on a formal, polite yet entirely bitchy sheet of paper filled with instructions to pay the bill online. )

pairing: jin/kame, genre: general, rating: pg, genre: au, format: one-shot, genre: angst

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kriszeth October 7 2011, 00:36:38 UTC
omg, i want a kazuya doll too, though i think his sadness will break my heart

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prologuesized October 7 2011, 03:18:50 UTC
Have him custom made ♥ ...Okay, too expensive probably XDDD

Thank you for reading! I'm happy you enjoyed it ♥

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sheenalinh October 7 2011, 03:09:05 UTC
it's been quite a while that I read your fic again. This is so lovely, and creepy, and sad, your style I guess ( ... )

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prologuesized October 7 2011, 03:24:20 UTC
I LOVE MOLES TOO. MOLE LOVE ♥

And oww, this comment made me so happy 8< Thank you! I'm really glad you enjoyed it ♥ Yes, I love Kame ;;A; He's amazing. Sometimes I wish I'd be able to bring more justice for him. ...AND WHAT'S SO CREEPY ABOUT THE LAST SCENE XDDD Hahaha... Well, I guess it could be a bit? XD

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sheenalinh October 7 2011, 03:36:35 UTC
what's so creepy about the last scene? You can imagine a rotten Kame and yet you cant feel creepy? I can XDDD~ But it's a nice feeling though >: I also plan to destroy his eternal beauty in my fic. But I have yet to have the courage to pull that string >:

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prologuesized October 7 2011, 09:28:03 UTC
...I didn't say rotten (does wax rot..?) but I can sort of get your point XDDD Your reaction is acceptably justified ♥ AND OWWW, that is a really difficult string to pull ;;A; How is it even possible to destroy his beauty... Even with tons of imperfections he still feels so special there's no way he can look ugly to me :< *biased*

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queen_kat_tun October 7 2011, 03:53:10 UTC
What is this gorgeous? ;_____;

I have a soft spot for doll!Kame. And dollmaker!Jin is just as wonderful. This is kind of vague, but it's really beautiful. Kame's sadness breaks my heart though ;A; and Jin too! Idk, they both seem like lonely souls. ;__;

“I’m sad,” he tells with a mournful voice as he stands next to Jin’s bedpost, peering down at his groggy form. “It’s sad being a doll.” WHY??? Doll's are supposed to be happy with enough affection. Maybe Jin didn't give enough? Heeeeee, my heart aches :| WAIIIII???

And the ending....so much heartbreak. ;____;

You write so well, don't ever stop writing. Hurrrrrr :3 ♥♥♥

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prologuesized October 7 2011, 09:33:09 UTC
Doll!Kame is so amazing ;;_______; I love your doll!Kame ♥ He's incredible ♥ There should be more doll!Kame around ♥ And I mostly thought of Jin as an artist :D Not a doll maker per se, like, he does all kinds of stuff but he might specialize in human figures and stuff like that so he made a wax... statue of sorts XD Weird, artsy stuff.

They are both kinda lonely souls ;;A; *hugs*

He's unhappy because he's a doll ;;____; He never had a choice. There's this barrier between him and everyone because he isn't like them. It makes him lonely. Which makes him sad. And stuff.

I hope I won't ever stop writing XD ♥ I really love writing if I get into it. You either ♥ Your fics are so prettyyyyy. Hurrrrr~ ♥♥♥

Thank you for commenting! And once again my reply is longer than the actual comment...

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prologuesized October 7 2011, 09:34:08 UTC
I'm really glad you thought it had impact :< Thank you so much for reading and writing such a pretty comment ♥ I appreciate it!

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yuuki_saya October 7 2011, 04:35:06 UTC
I like it. What can I say at 6.30 AM? Ah, it's calming and bringing light smile - probably exactly the same as Kame's ;)

Thank you!

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prologuesized October 7 2011, 09:35:18 UTC
Early! XD Thank you so much for bothering with this ♥ And commenting too!

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