fic: Sync

[prologuesized]

Title: Sync
Author: prologuesized
Beta: pinkeuphoria1
Pairing: Jin/Kame
Rating: PG
Genre: AU, Angst, General
Notes: I was bored and I wanted to do something short. Yuppie. I don’t even know.
Word count: 1,000

Summary: Jin makes a doll. The doll has emotions.

Comments

[sheenalinh]

it's been quite a while that I read your fic again. This is so lovely, and creepy, and sad, your style I guess.
I squealed silently inside reaching the mole part, Jin's signature. What else is lovelier? Sheena is always a mole freak ;_____;
And now I remember why I love your writing style in the first place, or how I love your fics. It's been years ago and I read a fic where you described Kame's beauty with so much love and care. We all love him. That's why we write about him right?
Another scene here that caught my heart is where you wrote "Kazuya feels like a doll". Even if it's he could learn or his emotion could be developed through time, he's just a doll and that's also simple for him to feel like a doll, as we can't even know how it feels even if we might be the one created him, therefore we also might create his emotion. I dunno, it's just weird, this feeling I have. But that sentence is very unique.
I also find the last scene creepy, with Kazuya had been getting "old" literately yet he found his happiness, his harmony, like you said.
Thanks for this loveliness ♥

[prologuesized]

I LOVE MOLES TOO. MOLE LOVE ♥

And oww, this comment made me so happy 8< Thank you! I'm really glad you enjoyed it ♥ Yes, I love Kame ;;A; He's amazing. Sometimes I wish I'd be able to bring more justice for him. ...AND WHAT'S SO CREEPY ABOUT THE LAST SCENE XDDD Hahaha... Well, I guess it could be a bit? XD

[sheenalinh]

what's so creepy about the last scene? You can imagine a rotten Kame and yet you cant feel creepy? I can XDDD~ But it's a nice feeling though >: I also plan to destroy his eternal beauty in my fic. But I have yet to have the courage to pull that string >:

[prologuesized]

...I didn't say rotten (does wax rot..?) but I can sort of get your point XDDD Your reaction is acceptably justified ♥ AND OWWW, that is a really difficult string to pull ;;A; How is it even possible to destroy his beauty... Even with tons of imperfections he still feels so special there's no way he can look ugly to me :< *biased*