So well. I read this on Sunday and didn't have anything to write a comment on so let's see what I can remember. SORRY. Um.
First of all. YOU COLOR-FREAK. SERIOUSLY. THAT IS SO LIKE YOU. I really adore the title! When I started reading I was like "okay wtf" but THEN IT MADE SO MUCH SENSE AND IT'S JUST THE MOST PERFECT TITLE EVER ;;____________; Why are you so awesome
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I threw the title. Seriously XDD It was originally different but the story didn't turn out fitting the title so I had to change it ;;______; ...I do quite like this, though. So I'm glad you liked it ♥
I'm glad you didn't think it was boring ashgkjagkl I really was/am so worried of that XDDDD I don't know. I'm just really concerned.
UM, I DON'T KNOW HOW PERSONAL? I admit I might've thrown in a bit but um I never paid attention to how much or anything because it just sort of came out really fast? ...I feel weird if I mix fic and real life too badly, it makes me think I'm writing badfic---
...Him painting Kame... this is really random, BUT I ACTUALLY HAVE TO BLAME TUMBLR :33333333 ...I DON'T KNOW. I just remember randomly seeing one post where this woman was sitting on a chair and she had been painted over and she looked like a painting but she was a human AND I ACTUALLY DIDN'T EVEN PAY THAT MUCH ATTENTION TO IT BUT SOMEHOW IT RESURFACED IN THIS FIC. Weird shit happens yo. Thanks Tumblr
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I insist, I am just a grammar-nazi... or, in this case, a prepositional-nazi XD But completely in love with this, and it is worthy of one of my usual, quote-this-quote-that comments (or mails) but ... not yet, cause this is big and I am sleepy and dskvbkrejv ... I STILL LOVE THIS THO!!!! Spam me more~
I apologize for not reading through it at all first XDDDD Seriously. I was just so sick of it already ;;_______; I WROTE IT CONSTANTLY FOR A LONG TIME, OKAY.
You sleep and rest your eye XDDD But I'm glad you liked it ♥ ...It'd suck if no one did after all the work put into it ._______.
I am definitely reading it tomorrow cause if I start now,there will be sunrise when I finish and I'm currently working on sth else and I shouldn't be distracted xD Wait for my comment tomorrow,dear <3
For some reason,I was really afraid sth bad would happen in the end xD I guess it's the way you write,the fact that I can never predict how a story of yours is gonna end (and I love that fact,so don't feel bad xD) and it really fascinates me :)
I liked Kame,I like the way he talked about his past and I simply adored the scene where he ran after Jin and all this "seriously" talk happened :) I think it's my favourite part of the fic^^
Jin was simply fantastic :) That innocent and childish side of him always mixed with the kind of affction I love reading :) And I'm glad that both Jin and Kame had friends like Koki and Pi^^
The way you showed their past was really good,it matched the flow of the story and every new memory was depicted at the perfect timing :) And we got a happy end,that's the best^^
All in all,it was another fantastic piece of awesomeness from you and I'm glad I got to read it :) thanks for sharing *hugs*
Unpredictability is good, yes. If everyone would know the ending, why would they bother to read it XD So if you think I'm unpredictable, I'll take it as a great compliment :3 Thank you ♥
I'm glad you enjoyed the characterization too ♥ ...I realised in the middle of writing it that I actually managed to work on about every character's personality a bit ':| So weird. Umh.
But but but but *hugggg* Thank you so much for reading again? ;;______; I'm glad you liked it!
i want to give you a proper comment, but when I come here. my mind suddenly goes blank xDD its soooooooo beautiful as always dear love it so much you truly are a great writer, you never stop amused me with your uncommon plot love the characters, love the plot, love all of this fic ASDFGHJKL I'm being incoherent here cant wait to read another masterpieces of yours ^^
Owww, thank you, I'm really glad you liked it again ;;________; ♥ This time I really worked for the characters so... I'm glad to hear you didn't hate them ♥
This is so good. Just, really good. Well-written and descriptive and yeah... great. It was long but had me hooked and I just kept on reading when I have two finals tomorrow that I badly need to study for and ahh...
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First of all. YOU COLOR-FREAK. SERIOUSLY. THAT IS SO LIKE YOU. I really adore the title! When I started reading I was like "okay wtf" but THEN IT MADE SO MUCH SENSE AND IT'S JUST THE MOST PERFECT TITLE EVER ;;____________; Why are you so awesome ( ... )
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I'm glad you didn't think it was boring ashgkjagkl I really was/am so worried of that XDDDD I don't know. I'm just really concerned.
UM, I DON'T KNOW HOW PERSONAL? I admit I might've thrown in a bit but um I never paid attention to how much or anything because it just sort of came out really fast? ...I feel weird if I mix fic and real life too badly, it makes me think I'm writing badfic---
...Him painting Kame... this is really random, BUT I ACTUALLY HAVE TO BLAME TUMBLR :33333333 ...I DON'T KNOW. I just remember randomly seeing one post where this woman was sitting on a chair and she had been painted over and she looked like a painting but she was a human AND I ACTUALLY DIDN'T EVEN PAY THAT MUCH ATTENTION TO IT BUT SOMEHOW IT RESURFACED IN THIS FIC. Weird shit happens yo. Thanks Tumblr ( ... )
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You sleep and rest your eye XDDD But I'm glad you liked it ♥ ...It'd suck if no one did after all the work put into it ._______.
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For some reason,I was really afraid sth bad would happen in the end xD I guess it's the way you write,the fact that I can never predict how a story of yours is gonna end (and I love that fact,so don't feel bad xD) and it really fascinates me :)
I liked Kame,I like the way he talked about his past and I simply adored the scene where he ran after Jin and all this "seriously" talk happened :) I think it's my favourite part of the fic^^
Jin was simply fantastic :) That innocent and childish side of him always mixed with the kind of affction I love reading :) And I'm glad that both Jin and Kame had friends like Koki and Pi^^
The way you showed their past was really good,it matched the flow of the story and every new memory was depicted at the perfect timing :) And we got a happy end,that's the best^^
All in all,it was another fantastic piece of awesomeness from you and I'm glad I got to read it :) thanks for sharing *hugs*
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I'm glad you enjoyed the characterization too ♥ ...I realised in the middle of writing it that I actually managed to work on about every character's personality a bit ':| So weird. Umh.
But but but but *hugggg* Thank you so much for reading again? ;;______; I'm glad you liked it!
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xDDD
i want to give you a proper comment, but when I come here. my mind suddenly goes blank xDD
its soooooooo beautiful as always dear
love it so much
you truly are a great writer, you never stop amused me with your uncommon plot
love the characters, love the plot, love all of this fic
ASDFGHJKL I'm being incoherent here
cant wait to read another masterpieces of yours ^^
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Good job^^
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But, um, thank you. Very much :3 I'm glad you liked it.
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