fic: Hush

[prologuesized]

It’s quiet now. It’s always quiet now.

You lie on the hospital bed and stare at the ceiling, a couple of tubes attached to your arm. There’s a soft and quiet sound of liquid drops and your slightly hoarse breathing but that’s about it. Your eyelids don’t even feel as heavy as they sometimes do.

It’s just that it’s always really quiet now

Comments

[aishayue]

aw...that hurts...
*hugs kazu*

and jin, if you're worried, go and tell him.

[prologuesized]

;;--------; Communication problems. The ruin of every relationship.

[aishayue]

yeah.. true. if you don't speak and even go and see the person, then he might thing you don't care anymore. what if kazu decides to end his life there? there won't be nothing left but regrets and many *what ifs*

[prologuesized]

Mmm. Or if there's been some hints of deeper feelings and then... nothing. It must hurt pretty badly.

Better not let good things pass by for such stupid things.

[pochnaden]

;__________; My heart was clenching for the both of them.
But, more to Kame. --the feeling of being alone without someone and the feeling of thinking you've betrayed someone is so T__________T.
This is a lovely angst one. Thank you so much. ^_____^V

[prologuesized]

I know. I feel bad for him. And it wasn't fully his choice either. ;;__________;

Thanks for reading.

[cutie_moody]

So beautiful and emotional!
You somehow have a very unique style.
I just love the way how you describe their thoughts feelings and emotions.
Not too much, just the right amount!
Thanks so much for sharing!

[prologuesized]

...This was just a very small and quick piece XD I didn't really even try. So I wouldn't go and compare it to more serious writing but... thanks. :3

[diisa_pinky]

spot for me, brb~!

[prologuesized]

Will wait for a proper comment then! :3

[diisa_pinky]

kameeeeeeee!!!! T_____T
it's so beautiful ♥
full of emotions~~ poor kame, poor the other person behind the door
thanks for sharing this beautiful one!

[prologuesized]

thank you for reading :

[circuside]

Lol I was going to write this, actually. Apparently I won't then :((((((((((((((((((

WILL READ WHEN ON THE MOOD~

[prologuesized]

WELL I DIDN'T KNOW. And you still could. Because this was super short and had pretty much nothing in it. Yours would be completely different. And better. And more thought-of. So I'd say go for it.

[circuside]

Well mine would've been a drabble too. I won't, you did it already 8< And I'm sure you did a lot better job than I would've done so.

[prologuesized]

Like shit I did.