fic: Northern Downpour

Aug 09, 2010 20:45



Sometimes you think the world is the colour of that dull grey you have a faint memory of painting on a sheet of white paper with your too-wet grey water paint. Sometime’s you’re certain it is. Like today as the rain keeps continuously and violently hitting the concrete ground, making little droplets of rainwater break into millions and millions ( Read more... )

pairing: jin/kame, genre: tragedy, rating: pg, genre: au, genre: romance, format: one-shot

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circuside August 9 2010, 18:09:15 UTC
SPOT.

DON'T TELL ME YOU ACTUALLY WROTE THIS NO NO NO ;;____________; I STARTED CRYING WHEN I READ YOUR TEXT ON THE MORNING. I SERIOUSLY STARTED CRYING.

...SO I DON'T PROMISE THAT I'LL BE ABLE TO READ THIS BUT AS YOU SPOILED ME ALREADY, LET ME SAY: I HATE YOU. BUT I LOVE YOU.

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circuside August 9 2010, 18:10:52 UTC
PS I HAVE THE RIGHT TO ABUSE CAPS LOCK. I DO I DO I DO.

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prologuesized August 9 2010, 19:08:04 UTC
I DID. BUT IT ACTUALLY KINDA FAILED AND DIDN'T COME OUT AS BEAUTIFULLY AND TRAGICALLY AS I WOULD'VE WANTED IT TO ;;----------; SO DOES IT COUNT?

...And who cries over a text message... (You.)

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circuside August 9 2010, 19:16:50 UTC
I CRIED BECAUSE OF THE MENTAL IMAGES YOU GAVE ME. YES, STILL CAPS LOCK.

GO WRITE ME FLUFF.

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cchristianee August 9 2010, 18:11:27 UTC
oh my.. *cry*
I really don't even know what to say to this ): So beautiful &hearts

And the ending *sigh* I can't decide whether to smile because of all the love, or cry because of.. well, all the love. lol

Loved it. (:
Thanks a lot for writing and sharing this!

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prologuesized August 9 2010, 19:12:05 UTC
Thank you so much for reading it, as odd as it was :< I appreciate it.

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yumiko_okahawa August 9 2010, 18:29:36 UTC
Ah, I love Panic! at the Disco and I love the song, the whole Pretty Odd album, actually. It's one of my faves.

So, I couldn't ignore this, at all. I just had to read it and I like what you made out of it~
I bet you get a lot of "Why did Kame have to die?" comments and such and, of course, I am not happy for that, but I do think it's an ending that suits the story perfectly.

I liked how you used metaphors in this and the narrating perspective; it's interesting. I don't read stories narrated liek this often, actually, so it was a nice change.

Kame knew, didn't he? That makes it even sadder to me *sighs*

Thanks a lot, it was a very nice read; almost poetic, in my opinion :)
I enjoyed it a lot! Thanks for writing and sharing! ♥

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prologuesized August 9 2010, 19:16:53 UTC
I love Panic! At The Disco too, have loved for several years, actually :< I like both their albums in a different way. The first one is just an... well... organized mess and chaos would be the most fitting description? And the second one is... well, more collected, completely different. But I've learned to like it too. Love even. :< I love how they can be nonsense sometimes but... Yeah ( ... )

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absinthe1213 August 9 2010, 18:35:41 UTC
that was...

heart-rending...
***my favorite word these times***

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prologuesized August 9 2010, 19:19:18 UTC
I'm really glad you liked it. Thanks for reading.

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sou_kiri August 9 2010, 18:46:39 UTC
Gah, I knew I shouldn't have read this. I watched the song first and kept thinking 'this is ridiculous' and couldn't really see how anything sensible could be written about it. And now look what you've done, my keyboard is all wet D;
I really admire just how much feeling you got into this. I still can't even believe something so serious can be written about something that seems that.. odd >: But.. I don't know. I wish I could, but I'm not even picking out the parts that are so amazing because five minutes later, my mother is telling me to stop being so emotional over a fic orz.
It's amazing, and I'm meming it so I'll never lose it, but will probably avoid reading it again because I'll wail just as much xD;

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prologuesized August 9 2010, 19:21:33 UTC
Dry your keyboard, it might break! D: I DON'T WANT TO BE RESPONSIBLE FOR BROKEN KEYBOARDS. They'd kill my heart.

I'm really glad you liked it and found it touching. Sometimes it's nice trying to write a bit odder things. It's a challenge to make it actually enjoyable.

So thank you. Even if you will never read it again.

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