Comments | prologuesized: fic: Under the bridge

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fic: Under the bridge

Oct 11, 2009 02:03

Title: Under the bridge
Author: prologuesized
Pairing(s): HayatoJin
Rating: NC-17
Genre: pwp, AU since Hayato and Jin are both there, darkfic
Beta by: -
Disclaimer: not mine at all, purely fanwritten
Summary: Just two twisted, lonely and broken hearts running into each others, trying to create something from their fragments.
Warning: rating and genre ( Read more... )

genre: pwp, rating: nc-17, genre: darkfic, genre: au, format: one-shot, genre: hayato/jin

Comments 16

circuside October 11 2009, 08:11:34 UTC

KJHG98SDFH98SD8HF9W83HYEFKSDHFSDF HOT.

I'LL LOVE YOU FOREVER FOR THIS.

circuside October 11 2009, 08:12:21 UTC

AND THE ENDING GODDAMNIT Hayato pwns AND I LIEK IT.

prologuesized October 11 2009, 08:33:20 UTC

...you like it as long as it's porn. *pat pat* XD

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prologuesized November 3 2009, 15:43:59 UTC

Missed you too :( Aa, that's so nice to hear.

AND HAYATO IS LOVE. There's something... amusing in him XD I don't know. There just IS. It's his attitude probably.

And I was thinking about Kame and Ryu as those whose names aren't mentioned there. But yeah, I guess in a way it is up to interpretation. Whatever the reader prefers :D

Thanks for the looong comment! It was so nice coming back to see that XD

pinkeuphoria1 January 6 2011, 00:07:42 UTC

YOU ARE EVIL, BUT THIS IS FAR FROM DISAPPOINTING!

prologuesized January 6 2011, 00:15:17 UTC

I CAN'T EVEN REMEMBER ANYTHING FROM IT. NOT SURE IF I WANT TO. BUT OKAY. *patpat*

iwiik_kriwiik January 6 2011, 18:26:54 UTC

<3.. I want to write a looong comment to show you how much I loved it, but I'm speechless!! Mooou :(... But well.. yeah.. it was.. yeah :D...
It was hot, oh so hot.. This was exactly the type of smut I love the most <3.. And Jin with Hayato!! Just the image *dies*... SOOO HOT!!.. you know, one thing is reading about pile of Kame's (who I love and everything) written the way it was - hot, but still funnily - and this.. having Jin and Hayato (who is my totally totally the most favourite drama character ever!!! <3) written like that it's yeah.. I'm going to die soon, probably <3... and eh.. the end?? did Hayato used Jin to get the money to go to the Ryu (it was Ryu right? RIGHT??)???? poor Jinny <3.. I'm loving it!! <3 As I said your writing is perfect and I enjoyed every single word of this :).. Thank you :)...

prologuesized January 6 2011, 18:30:47 UTC

Yes ♥ Our dear Hayato knows that blackmailing superstars works pretty well, financially speaking ♥ He'll get to his lovely Ryu so he can continue being a horny and sick fucker in the arms of his own Kame look-a-like. Jin can swallow his pride and go back to Kame. >3 Works for everyone. If they stop being stubborn and stupid, that is...

Thank you for commenting :3 God, it's been so long since I wrote this I can't even really remember XD Not sure if I want to.

iwiik_kriwiik January 6 2011, 18:35:29 UTC

Haha, so Hayato isn't that stupid.. he gets sex with idol, money and Ryu... yeah, that's my boy *proud* :D..
Wait, you expect Jin to stop being stupid?.. eh.. I like your optimism really :P

Why don't?? It's such a great fic!! :)

prologuesized January 6 2011, 18:41:49 UTC

He's such a smart boy when it comes to absurd stuff. ...And maybe I shouldn't expect Jin to stop being stupid XD Plus I don't really want him to. That's when he's the most amazing and adorable~

(And because I'm actually very wary with my fics and tend to start disliking them fast. Old fics arise nostalgia and fear of how bad they've been XDDDD I rather just skim through if needed)

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