fic: Under the bridge

[prologuesized]

Title: Under the bridge
Author: prologuesized
Pairing(s): HayatoJin
Rating: NC-17
Genre: pwp, AU since Hayato and Jin are both there, darkfic
Beta by: -
Disclaimer: not mine at all, purely fanwritten
Summary: Just two twisted, lonely and broken hearts running into each others, trying to create something from their fragments.
Warning: rating and genre

Comments

[iwiik_kriwiik]

<3.. I want to write a looong comment to show you how much I loved it, but I'm speechless!! Mooou :(... But well.. yeah.. it was.. yeah :D...
It was hot, oh so hot.. This was exactly the type of smut I love the most <3.. And Jin with Hayato!! Just the image *dies*... SOOO HOT!!.. you know, one thing is reading about pile of Kame's (who I love and everything) written the way it was - hot, but still funnily - and this.. having Jin and Hayato (who is my totally totally the most favourite drama character ever!!! <3) written like that it's yeah.. I'm going to die soon, probably <3... and eh.. the end?? did Hayato used Jin to get the money to go to the Ryu (it was Ryu right? RIGHT??)???? poor Jinny <3.. I'm loving it!! <3 As I said your writing is perfect and I enjoyed every single word of this :).. Thank you :)...

[prologuesized]

Yes ♥ Our dear Hayato knows that blackmailing superstars works pretty well, financially speaking ♥ He'll get to his lovely Ryu so he can continue being a horny and sick fucker in the arms of his own Kame look-a-like. Jin can swallow his pride and go back to Kame. >3 Works for everyone. If they stop being stubborn and stupid, that is...

Thank you for commenting :3 God, it's been so long since I wrote this I can't even really remember XD Not sure if I want to.

[iwiik_kriwiik]

Haha, so Hayato isn't that stupid.. he gets sex with idol, money and Ryu... yeah, that's my boy *proud* :D..
Wait, you expect Jin to stop being stupid?.. eh.. I like your optimism really :P

Why don't?? It's such a great fic!! :)

[prologuesized]

He's such a smart boy when it comes to absurd stuff. ...And maybe I shouldn't expect Jin to stop being stupid XD Plus I don't really want him to. That's when he's the most amazing and adorable~

(And because I'm actually very wary with my fics and tend to start disliking them fast. Old fics arise nostalgia and fear of how bad they've been XDDDD I rather just skim through if needed)

[iwiik_kriwiik]

Hahaha just like Jin.. I guess I know why it was Jin who got to play him :P...
Oh god, that would be so BORING!!! o.o

You do?? Seriously?? Good for you, even though there's nothing bad about any (new or old) fic of yours!! They're perfect!! (at least the ones I've read :D)

p.s. YOUR ICON IS SO DAMN PERFECT <3 :)

[prologuesized]

I know XDD I bet he made a good failing badass pervert. With little brains but a big mouth. XDDD It's a good role. Can't help but love Hayato~

And I do XD But I guess the writer's always his/her worst critic. That's how to improve. And stuff. Plus my self-confidence is really low so it's just natural with me XD

When wouldn't Kame be perfect~

[iwiik_kriwiik]

"With little brains but a big mouth. XDDD" :D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D... POOR HAYATO!! *pats the boy*

Well, at least you will always feel the need to try harder and write more and I will have something to read~.. But seriously, your writing IS good! :)..

Right right~ I forgot..

ne neee~ have you ever wrote Hayato/Ryu?? I'm somehow too lazy to search in that fic list of yours (it's long!!) and am probably going to read just as it go *this one I read first just because I somehow saw the pairing and it was just OH*.. But I would love to read something with this pairing written by you :P...

[prologuesized]

Umm, I seem to have only one fic where HayaRyu is the main pairing. It's here. Somehow I'd want to write them but I have difficulties coming up with plots for them. XD AND MY FICLIST IS LONG ONLY BECAUSE I FOCUS ON ONE-SHOTS XD CAN'T HELP IT.

[iwiik_kriwiik]

waaaaaahh!!! *runs off to read*
you should!!! :D.. they are the best pairing around here :D..
haha I wasn't complaining :P...

[prologuesized]

They are. They're amazing :3 I feel so sad for being so unable to do much for them.