Aaah. Thank you. You know I like this ship. I felt so bad for him, and just as bad for her. It's probably another reason why Berrisford Agenda worked so well for me. This has a lot of really great lines in it
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Thank you! I'm glad you liked it. Oh, I very much like the 'ship too - it crystalises a lot about Alec, and although I couldn't see it working out in the long term, what it was was good and really sad for both of them. I love the way he's a mixture of confidence and lost-at-seaness in TBA so I'm glad that I conveyed some of that.
Thanks for the comment about the long sentences. Will ponder. I tend to try to mix it up, in terms of length, but I know I'm guilty of being convoluted - partly because asides and qualifiers and digressions occur to me mid-flow. Still, just like short sentences, lengthy ones should be there to serve a purpose and I'll look out for that.
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Thanks for the comment about the long sentences. Will ponder. I tend to try to mix it up, in terms of length, but I know I'm guilty of being convoluted - partly because asides and qualifiers and digressions occur to me mid-flow. Still, just like short sentences, lengthy ones should be there to serve a purpose and I'll look out for that.
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