Secret Santa Gift for Roman Romantic

Dec 24, 2008 16:13

Because the queue apparently would only allow one entry per person and she was not going to have dependable net access today, serialbathera requested I post the other part of her Secret Santa gift for roman_romantic. All credit for this lovely poem belongs to serialbathera :o ( Read more... )

secret santa 2008, poetry, serialbathera, jack/sam

Leave a comment

Comments 6

roman_romantic December 26 2008, 13:36:17 UTC
What a lovely poem. I really like the structure you gave the piece starting each stanza with "As Samantha sleeps" and then in the final one "Samantha awakes." It is a beautiful juxtaposition for their entire relationship Thank you so much, Amanda! I love it :-)

Reply

serialbathera January 1 2009, 04:48:17 UTC
I am so glad you liked it ::hugs:: you are very welcome :)

Reply


serialbathera January 1 2009, 04:47:38 UTC
thanks so much Meg, for posting this me, I really appreciate it ::hugs::

Reply

m_ravensblood January 4 2009, 22:09:50 UTC
I was happy to post it for you. It was nicely done :D

Reply


empty_marrow January 2 2009, 01:27:34 UTC
This is really lovely! I like the repetition of "as Samantha sleeps," and of course any creation ending in a Naked Jack is a wonderful creation indeed. ;)

Reply


melanie_anne January 8 2009, 14:16:38 UTC
This is a lovely poem. :)

Reply


Leave a comment

Up