Fanfic : the smell of wet leather jacket

[serialbathera]

Title: The smell of wet leather jacket
Author: Amanda
Rating: Pg-13
Word Count: 247
Warnings: None
Disclaimer: I don’t own these characters
Summary: Dedicated to fleta John Grant doesn’t listen when people tell him to bring an umbrella.

Comments

[kosmickway]

Funny little vignette!

John quickly jogged across the street. A car almost hitting him before his feet hit the pavement on the other side.

Sentence fragment, babes. Put a comma between street and a and you'll be good to go.

[serialbathera]

Thanks sweet....you are right, I fixed it...thanks for letting me know. :)

[skewed_believer]

Cute. :3

[serialbathera]

thanks

[m_ravensblood]

Thank you for sharing with us. It's good to see some John fic :)

[serialbathera]

Thanks for reading :)