BALTHIER BUNANSA [1/?]bhujerbaJuly 27 2009, 16:14:04 UTC
OOC NAME; Pattra PERSONAL LJ; bhujerba E-MAIL; derp MESSENGER; derp CURRENTLY PLAYING; Tohru Adachi (hedonics)
IC NAME; Ffamran "Balthier" Bunansa. SERIES; Final Fantasy XII GENDER; Male AGE; 18 (aged down.)
GRADE; Senior, 12. CLASS; n/a
CANON HISTORY; - The third son born to Dr. Cidolfus Demen Bunansa and his wife. - At the age of sixteen, he became an Archadian Judge, thus joining the ranks of the prided Archadian military. - While the details of his relationship with his father prior to Giruvegan are unknown, it is known that once his father returned, their relationship was strained. - After Dr. Cid returned from Giruvegan, his sanity appeared to be deteriorating. He often mentioned putting "The reigns of history back into the hands of Man," and would be found in rooms, alone, talking nonsense with himself and invisible figures. Balthier was not able to comprehend his father's behavior--hell, he could barely stomach it--and eventually, combined with the increasing corruption in the Archadian government, he just left all together
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BALTHIER BUNANSA [2/?]bhujerbaJuly 27 2009, 16:14:39 UTC
AU HISTORY; - Born to a scientist and a lawyer, Balthier was raised in England along with his two older brothers. The oldest was destined to follow science, the middle child destined to law, the youngest--well, Balthier--was destined to not really think about destiny all the time
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BALTHIER BUNANSA [done]bhujerbaJuly 27 2009, 16:14:57 UTC
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JOURNAL POST; Quite a fat lot of transfers this year, aren't there? But I suppose there's nothing wrong with a little fresh blood, anyway.
Well, anyway. Welcome, welcome, to all those new little freshies and all these out-of-nowhere transfers. For those who don't know me, my name is Balthier. For those who do--well. Sorry for drilling it into your head a bit more.
I suppose that I could be offering my "scholastic expertise" to the rest of you, but it seems I was beaten to the punch by several other students. Hopefully you won't judge me too much if I choose not to shoulder the "model, welcoming student" baggage, yes? Wonderful.
THIRD-PERSON SAMPLE;
Not exactly the cleanest of getaways, was this? the man thought--he thought as he sat down at the very bottom, at the lowest of low, rotting in the dungeons of the Nalbina fortress.
Of course, I wouldn't quite call it a getaway, seeing how we haven't outed ourselves quite yet.Well, not exactly rotting, per se. There was still water. He still had some energy. He had only
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OOC NAME; Ana PERSONAL LJ; hello_goodbie E-MAIL; sweet.sweet.icecream@gmail.com MESSENGER; tsugeguchi@windowslive.com CURRENTLY PLAYING; N/A
IC NAME; N/A in canon. But if it qualifies, I named the girl "Rin" SERIES; Angel`s egg GENDER; Female AGE; 14
GRADE; freshman CLASS; N/A
CANON HISTORY; Rin is seen spending her days in a post-apocalyptic empty world. Her only possession is a big white egg she carries around and treasures - apart from a large collection of bottled water. One day, she meets a man who came from a strange, round-shaped machine that landed in her little world. After spending the day with him, Rin falls asleep and the man steals her egg. He breaks it and leaves, making the girl chase him, and eventually takes her away with the round-shaped machine.
CANON ABILITIES; Great orientation at any new location, good memory, ability to keep her mouth shut no matter what, if speaking is unnecessary.
AU HISTORY; Rin was originally born in a different, semi-destroyed planet, but after the man took her away from home, she was transported
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Hi there! While there's nothing wrong with the way you've written your current app, we'd like you to write a new application for this character while elaborating more on her personality and possibly lengthening the third person sample.
The fact of the matter is that your character has very little canon background and personality, and is essentially a blank slate. Since there is so much room for elaboration, I suggest that you re-app her under the Original Characters category while noting that she is based on the unnamed girl in Angel's Egg. This will give you more liberties with the character and allow you to develop her personality a bit more than canon permits.
Thank you for your application! We hope that you choose to rewrite.
Akihiko Sanada - Persona 3 [1/2?]caitlinnekoJuly 27 2009, 19:34:02 UTC
In which Caitlin sucks at samples.
OOC NAME; Caitlin PERSONAL LJ; caitlinneko E-MAIL; animegirl1992[at]gmail.com MESSENGER; AIM: caitlinneko MSN: msnsuxorz[at]hotmail.com GTALK: see email CURRENTLY PLAYING; No one.
IC NAME; Akihiko Sanada SERIES; Persona 3 GENDER; Male AGE; 17
GRADE; 12; Senior CLASS; N/A
CANON HISTORY;- Was an orphan from a young age, with only his sister, Miki, and his friend, Shinjiro, in the orphanage
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Re: Akihiko Sanada - Persona 3 [I lied - 2/3]caitlinnekoJuly 27 2009, 19:34:37 UTC
PERSONALITY; Akihiko is, first and foremost, brutally determined. He is one to constantly challenge and better himself, to set a goal and stop at nothing to achieve it. Whether it is physical (constantly training to become the absolute best boxer) or academically (studying to be in the top of his class), he will constantly work to being the very best there ever was that he can be, and will push himself to his limits and beyond. He is completely and utterly dedicated, and this can cause him to sometimes be nearly reckless, doing idiotic things to push himself or to accomplish his goal. He practically has a one track mind: his goals are important to him, and become the main focus on his mind. He will even often become restless if he is for some reason inhibited from working to reach his goal, or if he can't at least do something productive to better himself or similar (training is a prime example). Related to that, he has something of a competitive streak in him as he is always striving to be the best in whatever he's set his mind to
( ... )
Akihiko Sanada - Persona 3 [3/3]caitlinnekoJuly 27 2009, 19:34:57 UTC
THIRD-PERSON SAMPLE;Akihiko stared up at the building quietly, completely calm, practically devoid of emotion (at least as far as his expression went). He held his coat slung over one shoulder as he stepped toward it, scanning it with his eyes, but it wasn't long before a small smile appeared, and he nodded to himself, as if satisfied. He'd had a bad feeling about this place at first, but that went away soon enough - it would be fine. He could study hard at a half decent school for pretty cheap (as far as schools went, anyway), and he should be able to apply himself well enough here, if nothing else. Yeah, it didn't seem like a bad place at all, despite any of his first impressions
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Congratulations! Your application has been accepted.
Now that you're in, please be sure to do the following things: - Comment to the taken page with your character journal. If you had a reserve, comment to your thread to let us know it has been filled. - Join paedeia, paedeiaooc, and paedeialogs with your character journal. You may join the OOC community with your regular journal, if you wish. - Take a look at the scheduling page and fill in the independent study requirement. - Comment to the dorms page, requesting rooming. Welcome to Walton Academy.
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NAME; Pattra
PERSONAL LJ; bhujerba
E-MAIL; derp
MESSENGER; derp
CURRENTLY PLAYING; Tohru Adachi (hedonics)
IC
NAME; Ffamran "Balthier" Bunansa.
SERIES; Final Fantasy XII
GENDER; Male
AGE; 18 (aged down.)
GRADE; Senior, 12.
CLASS; n/a
CANON HISTORY; - The third son born to Dr. Cidolfus Demen Bunansa and his wife.
- At the age of sixteen, he became an Archadian Judge, thus joining the ranks of the prided Archadian military.
- While the details of his relationship with his father prior to Giruvegan are unknown, it is known that once his father returned, their relationship was strained.
- After Dr. Cid returned from Giruvegan, his sanity appeared to be deteriorating. He often mentioned putting "The reigns of history back into the hands of Man," and would be found in rooms, alone, talking nonsense with himself and invisible figures. Balthier was not able to comprehend his father's behavior--hell, he could barely stomach it--and eventually, combined with the increasing corruption in the Archadian government, he just left all together ( ... )
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JOURNAL POST; Quite a fat lot of transfers this year, aren't there? But I suppose there's nothing wrong with a little fresh blood, anyway.
Well, anyway. Welcome, welcome, to all those new little freshies and all these out-of-nowhere transfers. For those who don't know me, my name is Balthier. For those who do--well. Sorry for drilling it into your head a bit more.
I suppose that I could be offering my "scholastic expertise" to the rest of you, but it seems I was beaten to the punch by several other students. Hopefully you won't judge me too much if I choose not to shoulder the "model, welcoming student" baggage, yes? Wonderful.
THIRD-PERSON SAMPLE;
Not exactly the cleanest of getaways, was this? the man thought--he thought as he sat down at the very bottom, at the lowest of low, rotting in the dungeons of the Nalbina fortress.
Of course, I wouldn't quite call it a getaway, seeing how we haven't outed ourselves quite yet.Well, not exactly rotting, per se. There was still water. He still had some energy. He had only ( ... )
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Welcome to Walton Academy.
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NAME; Ana
PERSONAL LJ; hello_goodbie
E-MAIL; sweet.sweet.icecream@gmail.com
MESSENGER; tsugeguchi@windowslive.com
CURRENTLY PLAYING; N/A
IC
NAME; N/A in canon. But if it qualifies, I named the girl "Rin"
SERIES; Angel`s egg
GENDER; Female
AGE; 14
GRADE; freshman
CLASS; N/A
CANON HISTORY; Rin is seen spending her days in a post-apocalyptic empty world. Her only possession is a big white egg she carries around and treasures - apart from a large collection of bottled water. One day, she meets a man who came from a strange, round-shaped machine that landed in her little world. After spending the day with him, Rin falls asleep and the man steals her egg. He breaks it and leaves, making the girl chase him, and eventually takes her away with the round-shaped machine.
CANON ABILITIES; Great orientation at any new location, good memory, ability to keep her mouth shut no matter what, if speaking is unnecessary.
AU HISTORY; Rin was originally born in a different, semi-destroyed planet, but after the man took her away from home, she was transported ( ... )
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The fact of the matter is that your character has very little canon background and personality, and is essentially a blank slate. Since there is so much room for elaboration, I suggest that you re-app her under the Original Characters category while noting that she is based on the unnamed girl in Angel's Egg. This will give you more liberties with the character and allow you to develop her personality a bit more than canon permits.
Thank you for your application! We hope that you choose to rewrite.
Reply
OOC
NAME; Caitlin
PERSONAL LJ; caitlinneko
E-MAIL; animegirl1992[at]gmail.com
MESSENGER; AIM: caitlinneko MSN: msnsuxorz[at]hotmail.com GTALK: see email
CURRENTLY PLAYING; No one.
IC
NAME; Akihiko Sanada
SERIES; Persona 3
GENDER; Male
AGE; 17
GRADE; 12; Senior
CLASS; N/A
CANON HISTORY;- Was an orphan from a young age, with only his sister, Miki, and his friend, Shinjiro, in the orphanage ( ... )
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Akihiko is, first and foremost, brutally determined. He is one to constantly challenge and better himself, to set a goal and stop at nothing to achieve it. Whether it is physical (constantly training to become the absolute best boxer) or academically (studying to be in the top of his class), he will constantly work to being the very best there ever was that he can be, and will push himself to his limits and beyond. He is completely and utterly dedicated, and this can cause him to sometimes be nearly reckless, doing idiotic things to push himself or to accomplish his goal. He practically has a one track mind: his goals are important to him, and become the main focus on his mind. He will even often become restless if he is for some reason inhibited from working to reach his goal, or if he can't at least do something productive to better himself or similar (training is a prime example). Related to that, he has something of a competitive streak in him as he is always striving to be the best in whatever he's set his mind to ( ... )
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THIRD-PERSON SAMPLE;Akihiko stared up at the building quietly, completely calm, practically devoid of emotion (at least as far as his expression went). He held his coat slung over one shoulder as he stepped toward it, scanning it with his eyes, but it wasn't long before a small smile appeared, and he nodded to himself, as if satisfied. He'd had a bad feeling about this place at first, but that went away soon enough - it would be fine. He could study hard at a half decent school for pretty cheap (as far as schools went, anyway), and he should be able to apply himself well enough here, if nothing else. Yeah, it didn't seem like a bad place at all, despite any of his first impressions ( ... )
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NAME; Jas
PERSONAL LJ; neonsoap
E-MAIL; neon.hope@gmail.com
AIM MESSENGER; xchordsofsteel
CURRENTLY PLAYING; n/a
Application is here.
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Welcome to Walton Academy.
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