Comments | pristineungift: Embracing Chains Part II

pristineungift

Embracing Chains Part II

Jan 17, 2011 16:43

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lots character: jennsen, lots character: mord'sith, lots fic: embracing chains, lots character: darken rahl, !fanfiction, lots character: kahlan, lots pairing: jennsen/mord'sith, fandom: legend of the seeker, lots character: cara, lots pairing: cara/jennsen, !femslash

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mayireadtoday January 17 2011, 23:28:33 UTC

Great phrase: "her broken doll"

So interesting that Cara loves both Dahlia and Jennsen. Although of course Cara doesn't think of it as love but as possession -- that they are both hers.

pristineungift January 18 2011, 18:48:32 UTC

Thank you!

I think at this stage in her development, Cara would be hesitant to acknowledge anything as love, because that's a weakness. Instead she claims people as possessions that she is fond of. :D

madmguillotine January 17 2011, 23:34:48 UTC

ASDFASDFASFASFASFASL;KAJSDFASLDF [/coherent response]

It's so fascinating seeing what Jennsen's role could have been in the Reckoning AU. And then Cara...and then..it all ties together and...

ADFASDFASDFASFL;AIEFWE.

pristineungift January 18 2011, 18:50:16 UTC

LKSDFLKSDJFLSDJFSDLJFSDLKFJ [/coherent review response]

I'm glad you enjoyed it bb! Frankly, the long gap between chapters has been partly because I've been wrestling with this one, but I guess I showed that MOFO in the end. >_>

soulsearchr January 18 2011, 01:24:33 UTC

beautifully written.

Cara's possessive "love" seems very in character.

Thank you for sharing.

pristineungift January 18 2011, 18:51:10 UTC

I'm glad you enjoyed it, and feel that they are in character!

Thank you for taking the time to read and review. ^_^

mayireadtoday March 16 2011, 23:09:40 UTC

SO happy to see this again. Dahlia, don't worry, Cara has room enough in her heart for both you and Jennsen.

pristineungift March 17 2011, 20:07:16 UTC

Thanks for hanging in there! I hope to get this tied up in the next couple of weeks. <3

brontefanatic March 17 2011, 00:55:09 UTC

"These thoughts gave Cara strength, though they did nothing to ease the hard stone lodged in her heart and gut. She did not know what it was, and did not care to examine it." Great imagery!

I always love the different ways you write Jennsen and Cara. But I really love Dahlia in this, too. So different from the Dahlia in CiA. (Who I also loved).

I like the sharp-edged "feel" of this story.

pristineungift March 17 2011, 20:08:47 UTC

Thank you bb! Glad you're still enjoying it. Also, I love your icon!