Comments | pristineungift: Fanart: Khaleesi Droga and Danerys Targaryen

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Fanart: Khaleesi Droga and Danerys Targaryen

Nov 18, 2011 01:56

Title: Khaleesi and Khal
Artist: pristineungift
Fandom: Game of Thrones
Rating: PG
Summary: For the Gender Swap Challenge on throneland. What if Dany were the man and Drogo the woman? Khaleesi Droga/Danerys Targaryen.

Note: Droga's look is based on Guinevere from King Arthur. Danerys' look is based on Haldir from Lord of the Rings.

( My Sun and Stars )

got character: daenerys targaryen, got character: khal drogo, got pairing: drogo/dany, comm: throneland, fandom: game of thrones, !fanart, !challenge

Comments 13

dorothydeath November 18 2011, 08:31:56 UTC

Wow! O_O Very beautiful! :D

I love Droga! Her posture is so intense like she's ready to spring any moment. :D

Great job, bb! <3 Keep it up! :D

pristineungift November 18 2011, 20:27:30 UTC

Thank you! My drawings have improved a lot since I got Photoshop. THE PEN TOOL MAN. THE PEN TOOL. Means I don't have to rely on my wobbly hand. ^_^

meridian_rose November 18 2011, 10:07:01 UTC

Awesome :D

pristineungift November 18 2011, 20:27:55 UTC

Thank you! :3

hrhrionastar November 18 2011, 14:17:23 UTC

Ooh, pretty :D

I like the way Droga looks like she's poised for action - very intense :D

pristineungift November 18 2011, 20:28:42 UTC

Thank you! I just copied her pose from a screen cap where she's about to run. And then I put a slight radial blur on the line art to give her a feeling of energy. ^_^

boondock_angle November 18 2011, 17:24:17 UTC

wow these are beautiful! <3

pristineungift November 18 2011, 20:30:09 UTC

Thank youuu! :3

demarafis November 19 2011, 22:17:48 UTC

I think this and the pic of Jaime as Justice are your best drawings to date. Droga's fingers are a bit weird, yes, but I think Danerys' hand is very believable if the blur is removed =P. One minor slight - I feel as though Dany's right forearm is too... cylindrical. I get the feel that Dany's a muscular guy from the wide shoulders. However, the red cloth around the forearm is very small in diameter throughout. This makes me think Dany has no muscles on the elbow-end of the forearm, which doesn't add up with his physique. It might just be my monitor being too dark though (can't brighten it anymore) and not displaying colour contrasts properly ( ... )

pristineungift November 20 2011, 17:54:22 UTC

Thanks so much for this! You always leave the best feedback, with ways to help me improve but you do it in a way were I don't feel bad about my art. (I've had people in the past tell me my art was just plain bad and point out all the reasons why without saying anything good about it, which was just discouraging.)

I see what you mean about his arm, now that I look at it. It should flare out more on the left side as it goes up to his elbow.

I find I'm kind of intimidated by eyes and I've been backing off as soon as they look vaguely eye-like. Next drawing, I will try to do better, keeping in mind what you said! :D

demarafis November 20 2011, 20:22:49 UTC

Though I'm glad you find my feedback helpful, I'd feel a lot better if others are giving you constructive criticism as well, 'cause, honestly, I can't tell whether I'm talking out of my left buttock or not. It has been so long since I last attempted art that I'm sitting here thinking - technique? What technique ( ... )