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Shadows (part 4/?)

Jul 17, 2006 09:45

Title: Shadows (Part 4)
Author: angel_1013
Rating: R for language & violence
Characters: Michael POV with others thrown in for flavor.
Summary: This is the third and last installment of my Regret/Pieces series. You should probably read Regret and Pieces first as this won’t make much sense otherwise. Shadows takes us back to Michael’s POV and runs parallel ( Read more... )

sara, michael, angel_1013, r

Comments 8

wentworth801 July 17 2006, 16:04:44 UTC

Ah! I wish you wrote in Dr. Davis's glare so we know for sure whether or not Sara had imagined it.

angelicus July 17 2006, 16:09:17 UTC

Aww...you'll just have to wonder. Michael was too busy staring down Sara to pay attention to Dr. Davis and his glare...or imagined glare. Maybe Dr. Davis was glaring at someone else? Maybe he was constipated. *lol*

alienmom July 17 2006, 16:10:11 UTC

i love the zoo references!! such a perfect analogy. i had to LOL at michael telling the repair guy the best way to fix the crack!!

when you are finally done with this series, it will be so much fun to reread it all at once!!...over & over again...yes, i'm obsessive like that! :-P

dirtandweeds July 17 2006, 22:39:05 UTC

Well that's a bit depressing. Now with the mirror, Michael really is a caged bird.

sierra_foxx July 18 2006, 08:27:03 UTC

Wow. These are so good Angel...just being in the same space as Michael's thoughts as they run around and around...gives you that sense of stifling captivity that he must feel. My heart goes out to him! Can't wait for the next one! Nice job!

pebblesandpink July 19 2006, 05:29:43 UTC

I just read Regret and Pieces to here. WOW! Have I been missing out?! I'm loving the fact that Mike was totally annoyed by the crack in the ceiling then when it was fixed he was annoyed. :) Great writing through and through. Can't wait until the next add.