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Shadows (part 4/?)

Jul 17, 2006 09:45

Title: Shadows (Part 4)
Author: angel_1013
Rating: R for language & violence
Characters: Michael POV with others thrown in for flavor.
Summary: This is the third and last installment of my Regret/Pieces series. You should probably read Regret and Pieces first as this won’t make much sense otherwise. Shadows takes us back to Michael’s POV and runs parallel ( Read more... )

sara, michael, angel_1013, r

Comments 8

miss_mazzie July 21 2006, 02:35:22 UTC

Sorry for posting so late - it's been a busy week for me. But I wanted to say that I really like your Michael's voice. There's an acceptance to him which both belies the ending chapter of the Sara version with ice-cream and all, but totally supports it, too. It might be the most noble aspect of Michael to just forgive Sara after all this time. Anyway, I'm very excited to see the scene in his cell with Sara from Michael's POV!

accrues July 23 2006, 14:20:58 UTC

I've been on holidays, and like the astranged obsessed girl that I am, I couldn't stop thinking about this, so now I have two chapters to read. Well.. one now, but anyway.

Very very good, I love your chapters, they're just so brilliant! I liked the mention of the setup because it links back to your first story nicely :)

Lots of love for this fic!