Sacrifice

Mar 17, 2007 23:58


Title: Sacrifice
Author: bluedelft
Characters: Michael and Michael's Pet Rat
Category: Gen
Rating: PG
Word Count: 100 (Drabble)
Author's Note: This was written for pamalax's latest challenge, Bring Out Your Dead.  Somehow I claimed Michael's Pet Rat.

Sacrifice )

michael, drabble, bluedelft, gen, pg

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msgenevieve March 18 2007, 04:18:19 UTC
This is rather embarrassing to admit, but you've just made me go all teary. I hated seeing that happen in canon and you've just made it all the more sad, but in a very good way. Wonderful response to the challenge!

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bluedelft March 18 2007, 12:33:01 UTC
This is rather embarrassing to admit, but you've just made me go all teary.

*hands tissue* Wow, didn't think that would happen.

Thanks for the very nice feedback! I really do appreciate it.

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merctales March 18 2007, 06:09:14 UTC
Oooh...poor little Rat. *huggles it* You died for a good cause though!

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bluedelft March 18 2007, 12:34:14 UTC
You died for a good cause though!

He did!

Thanks for reading and commenting!

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brushed_velvet March 18 2007, 15:09:36 UTC
Ok, how exactly did you make me feel sorry for a rat?

He’s always been so kind to me. Not like the others who I see in the tunnel. They’re always trying to kick me or chase me away. This new person is different and it always leaving treats behind for me.

Aw, so sweet! Typical Michael too.

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bluedelft March 18 2007, 16:04:39 UTC
Thanks! Glad you enjoyed!

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sunrunnersioned March 18 2007, 16:14:54 UTC
*crys* so...sweet...poor ratty....*crys*

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bluedelft March 18 2007, 16:35:54 UTC
*hands tissue*

Thanks!

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winterqueen March 18 2007, 16:55:42 UTC
The subject intrigued me so I clicked on the link and wasn't disappointed.

This is a good spin on what happened from the rat's perspective and I liked your voice for Michael Scofield.

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bluedelft March 18 2007, 17:07:30 UTC
The subject intrigued me so I clicked on the link and wasn't disappointed.

Thanks! When I saw Michael's Pet Rat listed I thought it would be fun and interesting to try and write a fic like this.

This is a good spin on what happened from the rat's perspective and I liked your voice for Michael Scofield.

For me Michael is one of the hardest character to write. Thanks!

Glad you enjoyed and the feedback is greatly appreciated.

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