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Three Blonde Ghosts: The Present 3/3 [Ensemble] PG

Dec 05, 2009 04:48

Title: Three Blonde Ghosts: The Present [3/3]
Rating: PG
Word Count: 2,366 (12, 632 total)
Characters/Pairings: Mac, Veronica, Logan, Dick, Wallace, Piz, Parker, Keith, Max, Bronson some OCs (pretty much the whole cast as of end of season 3)
Spoilers: All episodes (from 1.01: Pilot to 3.20: The Bitch Is Back) This is post Season 3 so it's all ( Read more... )

fic: three blonde ghosts, mac, ensemble, post-series, au, mac/dick

Comments 22

jujubee December 7 2009, 23:03:54 UTC

I loved this so much and in so many ways. Thank you!

princess72385 December 7 2009, 23:40:12 UTC

Thank you so much for reading. Stay tuned because I'm hoping to get some more stuff written.

I'm so jealous you got to meet Jason Dohring.

jjazz59 December 8 2009, 03:59:34 UTC

I'm not a fan of Dick but I love Mac. I'm so glad she saw the light and gave Dick another chance. Wonderful story. I also love your other stories
especially Symmetry.

princess72385 December 8 2009, 06:00:24 UTC

Dick made a great 'Tiny Tim' for this piece. I'm glad you liked it and that you like my other stories. I'm especially proud of Symmetry because it was not only my first attempt at fic it was my first time letting anyone see what I'd written.

monroeslittle December 11 2009, 21:42:54 UTC

This was really good! I love Mac so much, and I love how you really got in to her head. And the idea that her future would consist of boyfriend after boyfriend because she believes in love but not that she can ever have it. Very well done ( ... )

princess72385 December 11 2009, 22:59:02 UTC

Thanks for reading and all the comments. I'm glad that you liked that story, and Mac's voice throughout it. I was a little nervous because I've never written Mac as the main character before.

The ghosts were probably my favorite part to write. Their interaction with Mac and the way they showed her what they had to show her (I've never had to write any real 'magic' or 'supernatural' stuff, it was a lot more fun than I thought it would be).

The future stuff was really sad and hard to write, but fun in a way.

Thanks again for reading and I'm glad you liked it.

sanya4 December 23 2009, 15:33:20 UTC

This was wonderful! I thought your characterization of Mac was really good. I liked the future that you showed us--everybody settling down and still being friends. And those three blonde ghosts were really fun. :)

love_is_epic February 7 2010, 21:45:28 UTC

While I never have been a real fan of non-LoVe centric fics, I found this one to be very enjoyable. I think you have Mac's voice down pat and I love all the characters you used to relate to her. She had some great lines, too, like the one about overdosing on Tofurkey. Too funny! The dialogue throughout was awesome!

I do feel bad for Mac and I think her issues with the whole Cassidy thing got completely glossed over as many things did in the series. But I love what you've given us here : ) Thank you for that!

And I know it was mainly a Mac fic, but you gave us a lot of LoVe to so the shipper in me just had to point out this line:

Veronica was always going to end up here, Logan was always going to be the only one she could trust like that.

Great job! So glad to see you back in the preverbal saddle with your fic writing : )